As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.

Why does the summary need to be revised?

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Answer 1

Answer:

This summary needs to be revise because it lacks transition words to connect the ideas.

Explanation:

The summary we are analyzing here is about the story "The Beginnings of of the Maasai," which explains the origins of the Maasai culture and the people's relationship with Enkai, their god. The Maasai are a semi-nomadic indigenous group settled in Tanzania and Kenya.

The problem with the summary is that is lacks transition words. As their name suggests, transition words are used to transition from one idea or sentence to the next. Examples are: so, then, after that, because of that, in addition, etc. Let's revise the summary and add a few transition words to see how much better it sounds and how much more smoothly the ideas flow:

"As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown inot the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle, so he grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. Thus, the cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Then, Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle."

Answer 2

Answer:

The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.


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Draw parallels between David McCullough Jr's address to the students of Wellesley HIgh School and the message of Miley Cyrus' song "The Climb" AND Five for Fighting's "100 Years" . Use text evidence from all three works in your answer using DIRECT CITATIONS.

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Answer and Explanation:

When David McCullough Jr states in his speech "you are not special" he is showing his audience how adulthood will not treat them with affection, as the audience's family does to each of them. David McCullough Jr meant that although the public has been pampered, protected and treated as if they were different and special, by their families, they are just ordinary people and adulthood will not treat them special but will treat them with difficulties and challenges that will often not be conquered.

The way David McCullough Jr describes the difficulties of adult life can be associated with the lines of the song "The Climb" sung by Miley Cyrus that say "There's always gonna be another mountain/I'm always gonna wanna make it move/Always gonna make it move be an uphill battle/Sometimes I'm gonna have to lose." While this sounds demotivating, David McCullough Jr shows that this is what will, in fact, teach the public how to live, create experiences and allow them to recognize who they truly are, understand their limits and realize that they are not special, must fight to survive .

The way in which David McCullough Jr reinforces that adolescence is a phase of extreme protection can be associated with the following lines of the song "100 Years" sung by "Five for Fighting:" Fifteen, there's still time for you/Time to buy and time to lose yourself." Through these lines, we can see that David McCullough Jr reinforces the idea that adulthood is different from adolescence, as a matter of time. In adulthood, time is scarce and everything has to be resolved quickly, there is no more time to play or lose yourself, as time is essential for more serious difficulties to be resolved.

(from The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, by Robert Louis Stevenson)

Read the passage carefully and then answer the question.

Two doors from one corner, on the left hand going east the line was broken by the entry of a court; and just at that point a certain sinister block of building thrust forward its gable on the street. It was two storeys high; showed no window, nothing but a door on the lower storey and a blind forehead of discoloured wall on the upper; and bore in every feature, the marks of prolonged and sordid negligence. The door, which was equipped with neither bell nor knocker, was blistered and distained. Tramps slouched into the recess and struck matches on the panels; children kept shop upon the steps; the schoolboy had tried his knife on the mouldings; and for close on a generation, no one had appeared to drive away these random visitors or to repair their ravages.

Mr. Enfield and the lawyer were on the other side of the by-street; but when they came abreast of the entry, the former lifted up his cane and pointed.

"Did you ever remark that door?" he asked; and when his companion had replied in the affirmative. "It is connected in my mind," added he, "with a very odd story."

"Indeed?" said Mr. Utterson, with a slight change of voice, "and what was that?"

The word in bold is an example of what kind of tone?

A. uninviting.

B. confusing.

C. exciting.

D. thrilling.

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Unfortunately, I don't see a word in bold. I'd love to help, but I need the word.

please help me immediately​

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i know the first one is synonym i don’t know the other :(

What word in Excerpt B has the same root word as
intercept from Excerpt A?
Excerpt A:
Excerpt B:
This would allow Eve to intercept the message as
it is typed into the computer, before it is
encrypted.
-The Code Book,
Simon Singh
What word part is used to change the part of speech of
the word intercept to the new part of speech of the
word in Excerpt B?
What part of speech is this new form of the word, as
used in Excerpt B?

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Answer:

The word that has the same root word as "intercept" is: interception.

The word part which is used to change the part of speech of the word intercept to the new part of speech is: -ion (suffix)

The part of speech this new form of the word is: noun

Explanation:

We can easily see that the words "intercept" in excerpt A and "interception" in excerpt B are very similar. What is the difference between them? Notice that "interception" has some extra letters: -ion. This is a suffix, that is, a group of letters added to a word with the purpose of changing it. While "intercept" is a verb, "interception" is a noun, precisely because of the addition of the suffix. "Interception" means the action of intercepting, that is, of preventing someone or something that is moving toward a destination.

Answer:

1) A- Interception

2) C- -ion

3) C- noun

Explanation:

Which word from paragraph 1 helps the reader understand the meaning of the word compassion in paragraph 1?

A. admired
B. cared
C. dignity
D. hope

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Answer:

B cared

Explanation:

Answer:

B cared

Explanation:

compassion - cared

Taking good notes helps you do all of the following except

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Answer:

Deemphasizing

Explanation:


Look carefully at the picture and describe what you say do not say the name of the person please just describe what you see thanks

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Answer:

a soccer player or a sports player winning or celibratiing becouse they look happy

hope I helped

How does adding the affix -etic to the words energy, athlete, and poet change the meanings of these words?

It changes them from nouns to adjectives.
It changes them from adjectives to nouns.
It changes them from nouns to adverbs.
It changes them from adverbs to nouns.

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It changes them from nouns to adjectives.

Answer: D

Explanation:

Re write: "She never seems to succeed even though she works hard." with However

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she never seems to excel in whatever she does although she pours all her time and attention into it.

The fearful passage of their death-mark'd love,

And the continuance of their parents' rage,

Which, but their children's end, nought could remove,

Is now the two hours' traffick of our stage

—Romeo and Juliet,
William Shakespeare

Paraphrase these lines from the prologue in two to three sentences.

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Answer:

Explanation:

This play will show you the consequences of the ongoing fights of two families in the duration of two hours. The result of these two families' quarrels will be the untimely death of their children who were in love.

Answer:

The play is about the frightening path of the children's doomed love and the constant anger of their parents. Only the children's death could end the fight. This is the story for the rest of the play.

Explanation:

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PLEASE HELP!!!!! SUPER EASY TEN POINTS!!! Which statement best explains Douglass's purpose?

A.) to highlight the difficulties that come with the knowledge that reading and writing brings

B.) to indicate why he felt it was important for all slaves to learn to read and write well

C.) to share his general beliefs on the origins of slavery

D.) to illustrate why he was so resentful of the slave owners

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Dihhhh is the answer because it’s astronomical

Answer:

B.) to indicate why he felt it was important for all slaves to learn to read and write well

Explanation:

B.) to indicate why he felt it was important for all slaves to learn to read and write well

Read the passage and then answer the question:
Computers are the printing presses of the 21st century.
Which term best describes the poetic device used in the passage?
A. Personification
B. Metaphor
C. Enjambment
D. Symbolism

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Answer:

B. Metaphor

Explanation:

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it is often said the media can make or break a person,especially,sports personalities. Explain how that happen ​

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Answer:

there are "haters" on the internet that will do anything in their power to tear a person down and criticize them for their work no matter what it is.

but there are also many groups, let's say for example running. there are many running groups where you can have accountability partners and many other people that can relate to you and your journey and have the ability to support you throughout.

The conflict between the twins continued, and for some reason, the grandmother favored the left-handed twin. The right-handed twin became angry and resentful. He was the truthful twin who always did the right thing. The left-handed twin was deceitful and did everything backward. You could never trust him.

The twins represented the two ways of the world which are in all people. The Indians did not call these good and evil. They called them the straight mind and the crooked mind, the righteous man and the devious man, the right and the left.

The main purpose of this excerpt is to
demonstrate that right-handed people are good and left-handed people are bad.
explain why some people do the right thing and others do not.
provide the reason why the grandmother favored the left-handed twin.
clarify what the Iroquois considered the two different sides of human nature.

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Answer:

clarify what the Iroquois considered the two different sides of human nature.

Explanation:

Answer:

The main purpose of this excerpt is to

demonstrate that right-handed people are good and left-handed people are bad. explain why some people do the right thing and others do not. provide the reason why the grandmother favored the left-handed twin. clarify what the Iroquois considered the two different sides of human nature. <<<---CORRECT

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Directions: Select one of the statements above that you feel you could write about. In the space below, write a paragraph that states your opinion (agree or disagree) and explain why.



Being street smart is more important then being book smart.

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Answer:

street smart means you have situational awareness. You can assess the environment you are in, who is in it, and what the available angles are. Being on the street, or in the trenches, or whatever low to the ground metaphor you prefer, requires you to learn to trust your judgment about people and what matters. This skill, regardless of where you develop it, is of great value everywhere in life regardless of how far from the streets you are. Most important perhaps, being street smart comes from experience. It means you’ve learned how to take what has happened to you, good or bad, think about it, and learn to improve from it. The prime distinction between street smarts and book smarts is who is at the centre of the knowledge. On the street, it’s you. In a book, it’s you trying to absorb someone else take on the world, and however amazing the writer is, you are at best one degree removed from the experience. Street smarts mean you’ve put yourself at risk and survived. Or thrived. Or have scars. You’ve been tested and have a bank of courage to depend on when you are tested again. Being street smart can lead to book smarts as the street smart sense what works and what doesn’t, and adapt accordingly.

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Answer:

1. Comedy

2. Romance

3. Science fiction

4. Horror

These should be all the answers

The ozone layer contains about _____percent of atmospheric ozone.
a) 60
b) 75
c) 90
d) 99

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Answer:

60

Explanation:

The earth is shielded from the dangerous UV rays of the sun by the ozone layer, an area of the stratosphere with high ozone concentrations. The ozone layer contains about 60% atmospheric ozone. The correct option is a.

The region of the upper atmosphere between 15 and 35 km (9 and 22 miles) above the surface of the Earth that is known as the ozone layer, also known as the ozonosphere, contains relatively high concentrations of ozone molecules (O₃).

Due of its ability to absorb a variety of UV light, ozone is incredibly valuable. Even low-energy UV radiation can cause an ozone molecule to split into a regular oxygen molecule and a free oxygen atom.

Thus the correct option is a.

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Which is NOT an example of reference material?

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opinions are NOT an example of reference material

15. Choose the best answer.
Which of these describes first-person point of view?
A)The narrator reveals the thoughts and feelings of one major character.

B)The narrator reveals the thoughts and feelings of outside characters.

C)The narrator does not reveal the thoughts and feelings of any characters.

D)The narrator is a character in the story.
The narrator reveals the thoughts and feelings of multiple characters.

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

First person pov is D. Therefore D is the answer.

Answer:  D)The narrator is a character in the story.

Explanation: Took the test and that was the answer

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I think It’s either A or C
The correct answer should be A. I hope this helps!

Which of the following is an example of deductive reasoning?

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Answer:

b For example, "All men are mortal. Harold is a man. Therefore, Harold is mortal." For deductive reasoning to be sound, the hypothesis must be correct. It is assumed that the premises, "All men are mortal" and "Harold is a man" are true.

Explanation:

Which critical vocabulary word describes what happens to Balboa's governorship eventually?

a. ceded

b. protrude

c. supplant

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Answer:

c. supplant

Explanation:

As we can see in the text above, Balboa was defeated and succumbed due to his own arrogance and thirst for power. This defeat Balboa suffered can be described by the word "supplant" which means to succumb and be defeated in a humiliating way, prostrating at the feet of an opponent.

Legal over the counter drugs can be displayed in a pharmacy or a shop?

True
False
Maybe

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True yhunininomoibunij

The art of the chicano movement, and the movement of the Chicano art What connection does the author make between literacy and art

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Hi. You did not enter the text to which this question refers, which makes it impossible for it to be answered. However, I will try to help you as best I can.

To answer this question, you will need to read the text it is related to. During this reading, you will be able to identify the connection between literacy and art through the relationship that the author establishes between these two elements, that is, the author will demonstrate a type of relationship between art and literacy, capable of creating good and positive for something or someone.

In April 2010, an oil rig exploded in the Gulf of Mexico. Millions of gallons of oil leaked into the Gulf, devastating
wildlife. Scientists tried to clean up the spill in a variety of ways. One approach involved the use of oil-eating
bacteria. However, scientists were divided on its effectiveness. Some maintained that the bacteria were "fairly
fast" in cleaning the spill. Officials reported that the Gulf would make a full recovery by 2012. Yet Samantha Joye,
a marine scientist, disagreed. She conducted a study of the sea floor. She found that the bacteria had cleaned
only 10 percent of the oil. She reported that the Gulf would take many years to recover.
Do It!
The reports were
А
ignored
B conflicting
С
humorous
D appreciated

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 The answer is B, conflicting.

Answer:

B conflicting

Explanation:

The reports were conflicting.

Read the introductory paragraph from a rhetorical text.

(1) The backyard of a city apartment building is not the first place one might expect to find a chicken coop, but so-called "urban farming” has caught on in recent years as people embrace the benefits of eating local. (2) However, raising backyard chickens can be a significant health risk for the surrounding community. (3) Cities need to relearn the lessons of the early 20th century and ban the raising of chickens in urban settings.

Which sentence should the writer insert after sentence 1 to provide the most relevant and useful background information for readers?

a. The idea of raising chickens and eating fresh eggs every day appeals to some people.
b. Imagine waking up in a busy city to the sound of roosters crowing a “good morning.”
c. In fact, a recent review of urban poultry ordinances in the United States found that 93 percent of the 150 most populous US cities allow backyard poultry.
d. There are many different chicken breeds available for backyard farmers including common Leghorns or Rhode Island Reds as well as more exotic breeds such as the Jersey Giant.

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Answer:

C In fact, a recent review of urban poultry ordinances in the United States found that 93 percent of the 150 most populous US cities allow backyard poultry.

Explanation: I got it right

The sentence should insert " In fact, a recent view of urban poultry ordinances in the United States found that 93 percent of the 150 most populous US cities allow backyard poultry." to provide most relevant and useful information for readers.

What is sentence?

Sentence is a group of words with meaning.

What is poultry?

Poultry means domestic fowls.

What are ordinances?

Ordinance means an order which is authorized.

What is populous?

Populous means densely populated.

What is backyard?

Backyard means a back garden or the area close to one who lives.

What is relevant?

Relevant means which is closely related.

What is information?

Information means knowing about the facts.

What is reader?

Reader is the person who reads.

Hence the option (c) is correct.

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Take a look at my hair...

I use my hair to express myself...

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Answer:

that sounds really boring

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from "The Gift of the Magi." In this excerpt, Jim’s character is developed

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Hello. You did not submit the excerpt to which this question refers, which makes it impossible for it to be answered. However, I will try to help you as best I can.

The only way to answer your question is to read the text it refers to. Within a text, characters are developed from the actions they promote within the situations in which they are inserted. They can also be developed through lack of direct action, but through reasoning, thinking, and observing what to do about something or someone. In that case, to answer that question, you must read the text and be able to identify the action Jim took, or lack of action within a situation. What's important is that the behavior Jim takes in this situation is meaningful both to him and to the story.

Fill in the correct wo A number of girls..... fighting in school. (was, were, have)​

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Answer:

A number of girls "were" fighting in school.

Explanation:

A number of girls was fighting in school.

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