Correct the four errors below which involve colons and semi-colons.

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As the nights draw in and the rain lashes down, it's all too easy to keep yourself indoors wrapped up against the ills and
chills. Or, if you have to venture out, doing so only if cocooned in your car with the heating on full blast...
Dr Terrence Latimer, Chief Medical Officer for the famous Team Turbulence, says;
"The key is not to separate riding a bike from your other daily activities, but on the contrary to integrate it. Riding to work
is the best activity, as that gets you in the saddle every day however, not everyone lives close enough to the office to do
that. You don't have to pedal the whole distance, though, as some trains do allow bikes on board. Where to put your bike
at work can also be a concern, but if space is an issue then technology has the answer folding bikes.

Original:

As the nights draw in and the rain lashes down, it's all too easy to keep yourself indoors wrapped up against the ills and  chills. Or, if you have to venture out, doing so only if cocooned in your car with the heating on full blast...  Dr. Terrence Latimer, Chief Medical Officer for the famous Team Turbulence, says;  "The key is not to separate riding a bike from your other daily activities, but on the contrary to integrate it. Riding to work  is the best activity, as that gets you in the saddle every day however, not everyone lives close enough to the office to do  that. You don't have to pedal the whole distance, though, as some trains do allow bikes on board. Where to put your bike  at work can also be a concern, but if space is an issue then technology has the answer folding bikes.

Corrected:

As the nights draw in and the rain lashes down, it's all too easy to keep yourself indoors wrapped up against the ills and  chills. Or, if you have to venture out, do so only if cocooned in your car with the heating on full blast...  Dr. Terrence Latimer, Chief Medical Officer for the famous Team Turbulence, says, "The key is not to separate riding a bike from your other daily activities, but on the contrary: to integrate it. Riding to work  is the best activity, as that gets you in the saddle every day; however, not everyone lives close enough to the office to do  that. You don't have to pedal the whole distance, though, as some trains do allow bikes on board. Where to put your bike  at work can also be a concern, but if space is an issue then technology has the answer: folding bikes.

I'm about 95% sure I got the 4 mistakes (I tried making them bold and underlined to stand out)! I want to explain the usage of colons/semi-colons though to help you in the future.

Colons are usually used in place of a dash (-) and can be used for listing items or noting them. I think the last sentence is a perfect example of that. Notice how "folding bikes" is being noted as "the answer." This would be the perfect place to put a colon, therefore: "... if space is an issue then technology has the answer: folding bikes."

Semi-colons are used as a break in a sentence. Sometimes people use it as a "period" to continue two thoughts in a sentence that go together, but are different enough to where they need a break in between. Semi-colons are also used many times before words like "therefore" or "however." I'm sure there's a list out there, but those two were the first to come to mind.

I hope this helps! :)

Question 3
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If anyone moves, he will be angry.
Identify the dependent clause. Type it exactly as it appears.
If anyone moves
O he will be angry
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President Roosevelt gave his Four Freedoms speech in 1941 as his State of
the Union address, asking Congress and the American people to support
those fighting Hitler and his allies. Read the following excerpt:
In fulfillment of this purpose we will not be intimidated by
the threats of dictators that they will regard as a breach of
international law or as an act of war our aid to the
democracies which dare to resist their aggression. Such
aid is not an act of war, even if a dictator should
unilaterally proclaim it so to be.
How does this excerpt develop the theme that the United States should get
involved in World War II?
A. It explains that the United States should oppose Hitler even if he
declares it an act of war.
O B. It describes all dictators as dominating rulers.
O C. It argues that Hitler will not view sending aid to help his enemies
as an act of war.
D. It establishes the United States as the hero that will conquer the
villain

20. Which of the following always contains at least two clauses? a. compound sentence complex sentence compound-complex sentence all of the above C. d​

He is well qualified, ………. he is still unemployed. (0.5 Points)
1 despite
2 although
3 however
4 inspite of​

Complete the conversation with be (not) going to. Use contractions where possible.

Rick: How ______ you and Marcia celebrate New Year's Eve, Tim?
______ you ______ go to any parties?

Tim No. We ______ go out for dinner. Our favorite restaurant
______ serve a special meal, and our friends ______
Join us there. But we ______ stay out late. We have to get up
early to go to a friend's house the next day.

Read these sentences from the excerpt:

I would sometimes say to them, I wished I could be as free as they would be when they got to be men. "You will be free as soon as you are twenty-one, but I am a slave for life! Have not I as good a right to be free as you have?"

How does the use of a rhetorical question advance the author's purpose of showing that all people deserve freedom?


It demonstrates that Douglass is questioning his beliefs.

It shows the reader that Douglass is unsure of his statements.

It indicates that Douglass believes he deserves freedom.

It reminds the reader that some questions are unanswerable.

Which of the following is included in an informed opinion?

They went with an employee from this agency. (ask about the object: use whom) help please ​

It is not usually news, when another old cave is discovered in the South of France. Rather, it is an ordinary event. Such discoveries are so frequent these days that hardly anybody pays heed to them. However, when the Lascaux cave complex was discovered in 1940, the world was amazed. Painted directly on its walls were hundreds of scenes showing how people lived thousands of years ago. The scenes show people hunting animals, such as bison or wild cats. Other images depict birds and, most noticeably,horses, which appear in more than 300 wall images, by far outnumbering all other animals. Early artists drawing these animals accomplished a monumental and difficult task. They did not limit themselves to the easily accessible walls but carried their painting materials to spaces that required climbing steep walls or crawling into narrow passages in the Lascaux complex. Unfortunately, the paintings have been exposed to the destructive action of water and temperature changes, which easily wear the images away. Because the Lascaux caves have many entrances, air movement has also damaged the images inside. Although they are not out in the open air, where natural light would have destroyed them long ago, many of the images have deteriorated and are barely recognizable. To prevent further damage, the site was closed to tourists in 1963, 23 years after it was discovered.

1. Why is discovering a cave considered an ordinary event?
2. What did the paintings on the walls of Lascaux cave depict?


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Question
Price of Book $14.99
9.99
Copies Sold at That Price 100,000
174.000
Total Revenue at That Price 1,499,000
1,738,000
Based on the data in the table and using the midpoint formula, between a price of $9.99 and $14.99, the price elasticity of demand for books is
A) -0.74.
B) -1.16.
C) -1.35.
D) -14.8.

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Write an argumentative essay for or against setting long term goals to land a dream job

According to the the following dictionary entry, what part of speech is the word margin as it is used in a sentence

Identify the subject and the verb in each sentence.

• Both subject and verb must be correctly identified to get credit for the sentence.

• One sentence has a compound subject and a compound verb


2. Juanita (s) enrolled (v) in three classes this semester.

3. I am a storyteller.

4. Lucy and Jim walked to the park and ate lunch.

5. You are the best teacher in the world.

6. My imagination runs wild.

7. Democracy requires full participation of its citizens.

Read the passage.

Amira is punctilious about where everything in her room should go, and can't stand it when anything is out of place. Her friend Luz is the exact opposite, leaving a trail of stray pens, sticky notes, and unmatched gym socks wherever she goes.

What does the word punctilious most likely suggest? Select two options.

Read these sentences from the excerpt:

What he most dreaded, that I most desired. What he most loved, that I most hated. That which to him was a great evil, to be carefully shunned, was to me a great good, to be diligently sought; and the argument which he so warmly urged, against my learning to read, only served to inspire me with a desire and determination to learn.

Why does the author use parallel structure to advance his purpose?


to give more information about the claim that reading and writing are necessary for freedom

to show the need for slaves and slaves owners to come together to end slavery

to explain why the author disagrees with slave owners about many different issues

to underscore the author's realization that reading and writing are important skills for gaining freedom

CAN SOMEONE HELP ME AND EXPLAIN ASAP THANKS!

17. Which of the following is correct? a. b. He have a lot of money. You has a lot of money. I have a lot of money. all of the above C. d.​

Read the sentence from A Girl Named Zippy.

I felt that there was so much more to the town than its trappings.

Why does the author use the word “trappings” to describe places in Mooreland?

to describe the exciting activities there
to show that people could not leave the town
to express that she loved growing up there
to explain that there weren’t a lot of choices there

1. Which statement about performing internet research is true?
O A. A
. A public library is the best place to do internet research.
O B. Be sure to use each search engine separately instead of wasting time on a metasearch engine.
O C. Never use your smartphone for research because of the many distracting apps on it.
O D. Most public libraries offer free internet access to patrons.

Read the scenario. A group of four friends are in class together. They are all members of the school band. After class, one member of the group asks the others if they want to discuss where to have their next practice. All four members decide this is a good idea. Two of the friends suggest their houses for the practice. All members of the group vote on where to have the practice. Which statement best describes the discussion? It is an informal discussion because the people could participate without preparing in advance. It is an informal discussion because the members are using diction appropriate to the topic. It is a formal discussion because the members voted on where to have the practice. It is a formal discussion because the conversation is taking place in a classroom.

you/ give/ ring/ tomorrow/ before/ i/ go/ work/ arange/ meet/ office?

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The sun-drenched sky spilled its rays on the grassy field,
warming the occupants of the picnic blanket. Patches of
wildflowers obliged the breeze with a fleeting dance each
time it asked. In the middle of it all stood a glorious
fountain that sent its ballerina-like water sprays twirling
and leaping with perfect precision.
What feelings would a character most likely experience in this setting?
A. Apathetic
B. Angry
C. Playful
D. Discontent

Click to read the passage from The Metamorphosis, by Franz Kafka. Then
answer the question.
Which detail from this passage best supports the idea that Gregor's
transformation is more than just physical?
O A. Gregor did not like the taste of the milk.
O B. Gregor's left side still hurt.
C. Gregor almost laughed when he saw the milk.
D. Gregor's sister leaves milk for him.

Alex likes to work alone. He has created a schedule, which he follows dutifully and allows him
time to write short stories. Alex's learning style is more likely:
A environmental
B spatial
C intrapersonal
D kinesthetic

write a letter which ends all of the sudden the thief entered the store

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Which of the following is not an example of how media can distort our views of happiness and success?

creating “ideal” lifestyles
showing instances of violence
crafting “happily ever after” endings
displaying material status symbols