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She reread the messenges over and over; regretting every word she said. She knew her best friend was hurt, and she felt terrible. All her previous thoughts flooded back to her head; Death, Insanity, Idiotic, Dumb. That's where her thoughts go every time she gets angry and pushes people away. She said some words she didn't mean, but what depresses her is the ones she knew were true. Her boyfriend said once that she was more beautiful than a rose. Remembering this just adds to her negative thoughts, because, just like a rose has beauty, roses have thorns. The thorns cut, burn, and hurt everyone who tries to get near it-just like her. As she recalls everybody she has in hurt in her life, she begins to cry. Not physically for fear of others seeing and knowing, but emotionally, where nobody can see.
They haven't talked in weeks. Charlotte takes her best friends side isolating her further. The only person she wants to talk to can't be reached right now and she goes further into her depressive state of mind. Her conditions causing havock into her already toxic thoughts. She decides she has had enough so she tries to apologize. Being rejected by yet another she can't even stand to be awake. However, every time she closes her eyes every event replays in her mind. So instead she wonders how much pain she can feel if she's numb. Weed and alchohal has consumed her as she starts to forget everything.
This self-destructive behavior causes her boyfriend to leave- the only person she had left. Her father left when she was two and her family no longer loves her. So eventually she gives up. Stays in bed for weeks, then months. Until one idea sparked her interest.
Bleach. If she drank bleach it would be one of the worst ways to die. 15 minutes later it's no longer up for discution. The bleach starts in her stomach eating her organs and flesh. She starts to vomit. She screams out in pain. She's crying now while she remembers how this all started. Her own stupid, blind, and unforgiving actions. She screams at herself, cursing her parents for bringing her into this world. In an hour the bleach has consumed her just as the darkness did years ago. She's gone.

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This story and sample write is amazing the way it is, I have felt this overwhelming pain, and sadness with one of my friends before. But you feel this way in times of life, but you will always get through it.

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Write a short story about what it might be like if you woke up
one morning with a
mermaid tail.

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Answer: SHORT STORY

Explanation: IF I WOKE UP WITH A MERMAID TAIL ONE MORNING I WOULD BE TOTALLY PSYCHED. I THINK I WOULD THINK I AM IN A DREAM AND TRY LOOKING FOR A CLOCK TO ENSURE THAT IT IS NOT A DREAM. I WOULD TRY TO WOBBLE INTO THE POOL AND SEE IF I CAN SWIM. IF I FELT SICK I WOULD CALL 911.

6. What is the topic of the following passage?
College success requires hard work, dedication, and persistence. Specifically, a college student
must be devoted to working through obstacles and frustrations in order to achieve success.
O college success
O working through obstacles and frustrations to achieve success
dedication
O hard work, dedication, and persistence

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Answer:

hard work, dedication, and persistence

Explanation:

The above paragraph has as its topic to show the importance of hard work, dedication and persistence in the academic life of a university student. In this case the paragraph uses this topic to show the behavior that this student must have in order to achieve success in his academic life and be able to go through this phase without major problems.

The topic for the following passage is: college success.

What is the topic of a text?The to[pic of a text refers to the main idea that is elaborated on in the passage of the text. In the text provided above, the main topic is about attaining success in college.

As the text proceeds, we learn of the elements that are required to achieve such success.

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Identify and research about a personality or organization who can be considered as a jewel of kindness in the current situation of a global pandemic. Write a brief note in not more than 30- 50 words. Photographs can be attached.

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Answer and Explanation:

City Harvest is an international organization that collects excess food and then distributes it to soup kitchens and shelters. During the pandemic, City Harvest has been helping feed thousands of hungry people. In New York, for instance, they have delivered food to up to 400 soup kitchens.

NOTE: If I'm not mistaken, there are 47 words above.

In Act I, scene i of Romeo and Juliet, the character of Benvolio embodies the archetype of the

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Answer:

Loyal friend.

Explanation:

William Shakespeare's "Romeo and Ju liet" revolves around the love story of two young lovers whose fates were sealed the moment they laid eyes on each other. The love that they shared for each other was higher than any obstacle, such as their family feud, and they met their death as they chose to be together rather than be separated.

In Act I scene i of the play, a fight broke out between the groups of people from both families. Moreover, this scene also includes the love-sick Romeo, pining for his lost love Rosalind. Benvolio, a loyal friend, and cousin promises to help him forget about Rosalind and get him another girl, promising "I’ll pay that doctrine or else die in debt."

Answer:

Loyal Friend

Explanation:

uses of water in the world​

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Answer:hope it helps

Explanation:

Water can be used for direct and indirect purposes. Direct purposes include bathing, drinking, and cooking, while examples of indirect purposes are the use of water in processing wood to make paper and in producing steel for automobiles. The bulk of the world's water use is for agriculture, industry, and electricity.

Answer:

Uses of water in world:

Explanation:

1) For irrigation, washing clothes,drinking etc

2)Without it the temperature will rise and no life will be possible here in earth

3)Human or any other living body will die within few days without water

4)Water plays huge role in our ecosystem so,without water ecosystem will get misbalanced.

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Use the sheriff's words and attitude as presented in this line from "A Jury of Her Peers" to explain why the men could not find any incriminating evidence in Mrs. Wright's home. (15 points) "'Nothing here but kitchen things,' he said, with a little laugh for the insignificance of kitchen things."

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Answer:

According to the sheriff's words, we can say that the men found no incriminating evidence at Mrs. Wright's house, because they considered "kitchen stuff" a particularly feminine matter and therefore irrelevant to the investigation of a murder crime.

Explanation:

"A Jury of Her Peers" shows how men consistently underestimate women's ability and contempt for memos in matters they consider to be particularly feminine, even if a serious crime has occurred.

That's because although Mrs. Wright is to blame for the murder of her husband, the men fail to see any evidence that it will break her down. This is because her house was somewhat feminine, with many things related to cooking, which the men considered was not relevant to the investigation, nor was it appropriate for them to be seen handling these kinds of things.

Answer:

"A Jury of Her Peers" shows how men consistently underestimate women's ability and contempt for memos in matters they consider to be particularly feminine, even if a serious crime has occurred.

Explanation:

Determine whether the word in bold is a plural noun, a possessive noun, or neither of them. Maureen’s goal is to play drums in Lon’s band. Question 41 options: a) plural b) possessive c) neither of them

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which letter is in bold?

Answer:

The answer is

Explanation:

A) Possessive.

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Please Help! Find the errors in this email.
Hello, Robert, Thanks for your email.
How´s it going?
I have been really busy with the final exams, that's why I couldn't answer you quickly, sorry for that.
Now I am freer and I can help you with what you mentioned last time, to be volunteer at a low-income school.
Are you having a good time like a teacher?
Children behave well?
You have managed to awaken my curiosity and that I am interested in participating as an assistant.
Anyway, I was also writing to tell you that I were accepted to university! I would like to celebrate with you, would you like to go eat ice cream on Saturday?
I would like to see you ad heard your news, I hope you can come!
Speak soon.
Myle

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Answer:

Is

Explanation:

How is it going is the correct pronunciation.Free is the correct spelling. Are the children behaving well can be written.i was accepted by the University.Go and eat ice cream. I would like to see u and hear your news.

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Have a nice day!!!!

Explanation:

it says How´s                freer isn't a word       I were accepted to university! is correct sentence either            

What is the significance of the items in Mariam’s tin in the book Shooting Kabul?

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Answer:

The family's unity

Explanation:

The book Shooting Kabul tells the story of an Afghan family trying to escape the country which had been disrupted because of the activities of the Taliban. Fadi was 12 years old, his little sister Mariam was 6. They had an older sister named Noor, and their parents Habib and Zafooni. As they made their way out of the country, Mariam pleaded with Fadi to put his doll in his backpack but he refused, urging her to move along while he held her hand. Mariam's doll eventually fell down and while she tried to pick it up, the Taliban appeared causing the truck driver who was picking them to drive off. Mariam was left behind.

Her tin which was still carried by Fadi who now felt much guilt contained, Mariam's baby tooth,  a tassel from her father's graduation gown, a buckle from Noor's belt, Zafoona's broken pearl earring, and a photograph of Fadi holding Mariam when she was a baby. All these were a symbol of the family's unity.

Select the sentence that illustrates the proper use of parallel structure

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Answer:

can you give the sentences , then I'll edit the ans of my if I get the sentence

In your speech you plan to persuade your listeners to choose a vegetarian lifestyle using cognitive dissonance. However, you failed to survey your audience before selecting your topic. After your performance you find out that several students believe that God put animals on the Earth to provide humans with needed nourishment. You should have considered _______________________.

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Answer:

inducing dissonance on true believers is unlikely to change behaviors.

Explanation:

Cognitive Dissonance Theory was developed by Leon Festinger in 1957. The Cognitive Dissonance Theory takes place when there are two conflicting beliefs, attitudes, or values. It creates an aversive state, where the person is required to choose between the conflicting values and beliefs.

In persuasion speech, the orator needs to use cognitive dissonance in a manner that the audience shows a slight of change in their behavior. The aim of using cogntive dissonance is persuasive speech is to induce the audience with dissonance that they show changes in their beliefs and attitudes.

In the given scenario, you should have considered to induce dissonance on true believers. In doing so, one should have added the health issues that people face because of eating animals.

What word means “continual trouble or distress”

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Answer:

Anxiety, worry, stressed

Answer: stressed

Explanation:

what do the people do with colours at holi?​

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Answer:

People use the colour flights to recall joy and love, which were immortalised in the story of Krishna and Radha's celestial love. :)

Explanation:

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What type of irony is it when a reader knows something a character does not?

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Answer:

Dramatic irony

Explanation:

Her friend standing in the corner phrase or clause?

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Answer:

It's a phrase.   (It lacks a verb.)

Explanation:

A clause is a group of words with a subject-verb unit.

A phrase is a group of words without a subject-verb unit.

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Her friend was standing in the corner.

OR

Her friend standing in the corner was waving her arms frantically.

You recently had to make an important decision.
Wite a letter to your friend, telling your friend about the important decision you had to make.
In the letter:
*you should describe the decision you had to make
*explain why it was important
*say how you felt after you reached the decision.
Your letter should be between 200-300 words long.
Igcse English Cambridge (English Language 1123)

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Today, I made the worst decision in the world. Today I went to my aunt to amend our relationship, but it was for naut... she wanted nothing to do with me, I also tried to amend my relationship with Derek but all he wanted was to mess around, I then felt so bad for even breaking up the relationships we had with them... but you must understand that I didn’t mean to ruin the relationships... I hope you don’t regret being friends with me... i wish you well

Yours truly -Yuri ♥︎

What does Mr. X really do? (in liar and spy)

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do you mean his real job? it doesn’t specify but we for sure know that mr.x isn’t smuggling body’s, most likely he works in an office

Answer:

is it late now

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I am a member of British parliament and I need to write a reply to the declaration of independence​

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Answer:

So you're definitely furious and I'm not gonna help you cheat but make sure to act furious as the song You'll be Back from Hamilton describes the feeling really well

Explanation:

fax

Russia .......... earlier this week that it ......... all its troops out of George
a) had announced /pulled
b) announces /would have pulled
c) announced /had pulled
d) announced / has pulled
e) has announced /was pulling ​

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Answer:

Russia announced earlier this week that it has pulled all its troops out of George

Explanation:

Announced - simple past tense because you have an exactly period of time: earlier this week.

Has pulled - present perfect tense because the action has taken part in the past and still continues in effect.

Answer:

d) announced / has pulled

Younique is writing an essay in favor of recycling to reduce garbage in the ocean. Which piece of evidence is least relevant to her argument? 1. Litter is not only ugly, but also harmful to animals in national parks 2. Millions of plastic water bottles end up in the ocean each year, adding to the millions already there and not decomposing. 3. Recycling has become easier with many public places including recycling bins right next to all garbage cans. 4. Plastic that hasn't been recycled has extremely harmful effects to the wildlife that live in the ocean.

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Answer:

1. Litter is not only ugly but also harmful to animals in national parks.

Explanation:

Option number one is the least important piece of evidence in Younqique's essay because it is not giving information about how garbage and not recycling can affect the oceans. The statement is talking about animals in general and not giving specific evidence about how animals in the sea are affected. The other options are relevant because they inform about the benefits of recycling and the negative impact that the accumulation of garbage in oceans has, encouraging us to recycle.

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Answer:

C.

Explanation:

Throughout his sermon Jonathan Edwards discusses people’s relationships with god. How does Edwards change or refine the idea of god and people’s relationship with god from the beginning to the end of the excerpt

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Answer:

Edwards' sermon for the most part is based on the wrath of God and the fear that all sinners should fear at the time of their death.

Explanation:

In order to find a way for the faithful to come to church, Edward tries to scare them through his sermon. He wants to show that they are practically very sentenced if they do not repent of their sins and return to the church to try to obtain God's mercy. It is not just enough to be a good person. That would be useless if they don't go to church.

Let's look at some of the following quotes from his sermon that justify this answer:

"Dam-nation don’t slumber, the Pit is prepared, the Fire is made ready, the Furnace is now hot, ready to receive them, the Flames do now rage and glow" "Natural Men’s Prudence and Care to preserve their own Lives, or the Care of others to preserve them, don’t secure‘ em a Moment. " "'Tis everlasting Wrath. It would be dreadful to suffer this Fierceness and Wrath of Almighty God one Moment; but you must suffer it to all Eternity: there will be no End to this exquisite horrible Misery ..."

Using the charts above as references, find two words using the root below. If you need to, use your dictionary (Do not use the example word given above.). Then illustrate that the word has the meaning of that root by using one of those words in a sentence.


Example: mon


1. admonish


2. demonstrate


She admonished her children to stay away from the busy street.


cap

1. 2.


WRITER

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Answer:

capital

capacity

Explanation:

Capacity-the elevator was at max capacity with 5 people inside

Which choice at the underlined portion maintains the tone consistent throughout the rest of the text? Mr. and Mrs. Kaufman request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their daughter, Lana, to Edgar Chan. It’s gonna be sweet. Choose 1 answer: (Choice A) : NO CHANGE (Choice B) : We look forward to celebrating with you. (Choice C) : We hope it's good.

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Answer: (Choice B): We look forward to celebrating with you.

Explanation: The tone of a text is the attitude of the writer towards an audience. It differs according to the words the writer decides to use. This text is an invitation to Mr. and Mrs. Kaufman's daughter's wedding.  Therefore, it is written in a rather formal tone. The (Choice B): "We look forward to celebrating with you.", maintains the same formality, and never loses the cordial tone.

What point is hurston trying to make in her first paragraph? Is she “the only Negro in the United States whose grandfather on the mother’s side was not an Indian chief”?

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Answer:

The point Hurston is trying to make is through humor, showing the black people as part of the society of the United States.

Explanation:

She is not “the only Negro in the United States whose grandfather on the mother’s side was not an Indian chief”. In fact, the term "Indian chief" refers to the white owners of the slaves. At that time it was very common for these people to abuse women to get them pregnant and thus generate more slaves, so she is not the only one in this situation.

What the author tries to show with this phrase is the diversity of races is abundant in the United States, since their descendants come in part from white men, for which the author criticizes the racism of people who still do not accept it.

The point Hurston is trying to make is through humor is :

- Showing the black people as part of the society of the United States.

United States

The point Hurston is trying to make is through humor is that showing the black people as part of the society of the United States.

She isn't “the as it were Negro within the Joined together States whose granddad on the mother’s side was not an Indian chief”. In reality, the term "Indian chief" alludes to the white proprietors of the slaves.

This express is the differing qualities of races is plenteous within the United States.

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Read the excerpt from "Flight into Yesterday." This leg was also the most dangerous of the entire trip. Howland, 2,600 miles to the east, was a tiny speck of land in the middle of the vast Pacific. It would take all of her skill as a pilot and Fred’s as a navigator to find the island. But danger did not worry her. She knew that flying carried risks. She faced them and accepted them. What mattered was setting herself a challenge and meeting it. What mattered was showing that women could do what men could do and encouraging other women to do what they were capable of. That was why she was flying over the Pacific, looking for a speck of land. Fame was never her goal. The important thing was to do what she had set out to do and to do it as well as she knew how. She had been that way all her life. Amelia Earhart, world-famous flier, was very much like the young girl who once lived in Atchison, Kansas. What best describes the author’s purpose?

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Answer:

Thanks for the points but,

C. She wanted to show that women could do what men could do.

Explanation: Yuhh Get Into It!!!

The option that best describes the author’s purpose is: B. The author wants readers to understand why Earhart would go on such a dangerous trip.

In the narration given in the text above, we see that the author was trying to explain the motivations of Earhart in going on the dangerous trip.

He explained that Earhart was not interested in being famous, rather, she simply wanted to achieve what she had set out to do.

So, option B describes the author's purpose.

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write a strong cause and effect paragraph

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Answer:

Because the wind was blowing hard Susie's umbrella flew away

Explanation:

In the poem “second estrangement” what is the authors message ? Respond in one paragraph using text evidence to support your ideas

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Answer:

Realizing that the world is filled with strangers.

Explanation:

In the poem "Second Estrangement", the poet presents the image of an innocent child who realizes that the world is filled with strangers. She says that one does not realize how scary and estrange the world is until he/she is lost and all alone.Through the lines "only to see the face  look strangely down, utterly  foreign, utterly not the one  who loves you", the poet presents the idea of seeing the reality of life. Just like the child, everyone of us think we are in a safe place until we see the reality of life.Then she ends the poem with the lines "How far the world you knew, & tall,  & filled, finally, with strangers."  to ironically bring the message of life's cruelty and reality.

Second Estrangement , requests in its first line to “Please raise your hand” as the poem describes being a child lost in a market or a mall and calling for a parent.

A stranger, accidentally thinking he is yours, your family or parent, even Grabbing for his hands, even calling the word you said then for “Father,” only to see the face look strangely down, utterly foreign, utterly not the one who loves you, you who are a bird suddenly stunned by the glass partitions of rooms.

The child experiences an early estrangement in a world that is tall, & filled, finally, with strangers.In this last line, we see how everything looms large and unfamiliar for a child.

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word start with t and end with t what is that​

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Answer:

Throat is a word that starts wit t and end with t.

Explanation:

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Answer: test, teapot, throat,tract, turret

Explanation:

In "The Story of an Hour," Kate Chopin suggests that marriage can be oppressive for women. Which line in these excerpts from the story supports that suggestion?
Knowing that Mrs. Mallard was afflicted with a heart trouble, great care was taken to break to her as gently as possible the news of her husband's death.



The vacant stare and the look of terror that had followed it went from her eyes. They stayed keen and bright. Her pulses beat fast, and the coursing blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.



There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature. A kind intention or a cruel intention made the act seem no less a crime as she looked upon it in that brief moment of illumination.



She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air.

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Answer:

There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature.

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