I had to write a poem for one of my classes and I just wanted some feedback...
Rate it 1-10. Easy pts, & will give Brainliest! :)

Love is caring, and LOVE’S the only thing needed in such a cruel world we live in.

Sad truth is, we don't seem to understand yet what LOVE truly is. How can this be?

We're losing faith, hope, while at the same time falling out of love as time passes by.

Looking at the stars thinking, why do we choose hatred over kindness?

I've heard many stories; people that are lost and going through hard times. Some end their lives, judged by those they want to compare to.

Different is what makes us beautiful though. And we shouldn't be fighting these battles in our heads ALONE.

ALL burdens, ONLY God can wipe our tears away. He can fill us up.

Because he’s the definition of Love, always forgiving. LOVE never failing. Even if we fail him.

‘Cause If I'm being honest, sometimes wrong things be feeling like the right things. I guess that's Society's way of living.

We’re broken people and indeed in need of a Savior. LOVE heals every wound. Knowing he’s LOVE.

I know I gotta keep my head up. For my creator be giving us sense to our lives. It makes sense. Well, he’s been good 24/7, showing me the way when lost in this world, he’s there guiding my steps no matter whatever situation.

So grateful LOVE came into my life, making my days brighter. Won’t ever look back.

Explanation:

sincerely, I'll rate it 8.

good luck

What is the verb tense used in this sentence? ''By then, some of your dreams will have become smaller -- but not all.'' A( past B( present C( future D( future perfect.

Can i get some one to help end my scary story make sure it ends scary maybe grammar it too thxs



“SLAM” The door behind me shut,the lights go off ,it was dark,it was too dark,I couldn't see my hands,where I was stepping, I didn't have a clue.Surprised enough I didn't trip. Big enough to be thunder a loud BOOM! I raced down the long room,like a hall,I knew what was coming next all my fears coming true. “ZAP” ,“ FLASH”lighting strikes”BOOM” BOOM” thunder pounds.”PitterPatter” “pitter patter” RAIN!, “pitter patter” Just racing down and down the hall,”Splash” I trip,I keep movinging,Running,or racing it doesn't matter”FLASH”ZAP” “pitter patter” “Splash””Same thing kept repeating in my head “Don’t stop running” ,“Don’t stop running”,“Don’t stop running”“Don’t stop running” The louder and louder it got,“Don’t stop running”“Don’t stop running” “Don’t stop running”

I cover my ears “Yelling stop stop” I keep”scattering down the long hall” “I couldn't stop no I couldn't” I heard sirens,maybe they had come for me, wouldn't care about anything just get me out of here! “The sirens became louder” And Louder And Louder Louder” “BOOM” everythings all is colliding” it's too much i'm overwhelming ``''Screech”An awful cry starts” still as hearing “dont stop” What is happening? I don't know,”tick tock” “tick tock” “Screech” Tick tock tick tock,Boom “zap”’flash”pitter patter ”ticktock,ticktock” ”flash”screech”Splash”BOOM”. SPLASH” what was that!,My hands are covered in blood.“zap”’flash””tick tock””BOOM”. “tick tock” “Screech” Tick tock tick tock,Boom pitter patter ”ticktock,ticktock” ”flash”screech”Splash SPLASh.I trip, splash I cant bare it.

I scream”STOP IT I SAY! JUST STOP! STOP IT” “drip,drip,drip”.I curled up into a ball im lying there,”soaked in blood.Crying in the corner,scared to be found,touched or carried.

Seconds turn into minutes,minutes turn into hours,the hours turn into days, The days into weeks,weeks into months,The months into years.I feel to as i became to death,I couldn't see, nor hear, if the only thing i could hear, is the same,Tick tick tick tick, zap zap zap zap,tick zap tick zap tick BOOM,FLASH,tick zap zap zap tick,BOOM

BOOM,FLASH, Scratch! BOOM FLASH ZAP,BOOM,SCRECh”The louder and faster it got” ZAP ZAP TICK SCHREACH BOOM BOM FLASH,ZAP,BOOM SCHRECH tick tick ,tick,BOOM FLASH, BOOM! ZAP.it just woulndt stop, it adding on new sounds i knew would come, POUND POUND POUND ZAP SPLASH,SCHEECH,BOOM,FLASH SCHREECH,ZAP ZAP,TICK TICK,POUND SPLASH! BOOM,SQUEAK SQUEAK,TIcK TICK POUND!”Starting it again it keeps repeating over and over,BAM BAM” Then it comes back, that little voice… in my head… telling me, to keep going”