I wrote these, and was wondering which one was better....

Prolouge
Fairies are wonderful creatures, filled with light and joy. With little silky wings and anglelic voices. They dance on the wind and fill the skies with laughter. But within them lies a darkness, like all creatures have. And when you hurt them, the darkness takes over. their wings turn black and sharp, their light turns to shadows and their voices turn to screams, They hold to hate and anger, to all the dark things that swim in mens minds, they know joy no more, and they wish to steal yours. So, Please heed my warning. and I will tell you a story, anout a fairy whom was betrayed, a fairy who lost her way, a fairy whos tears stained the world.
Chapter one
Her feet skim the forest floor, her hands brush the trees, her eyes close and her lips sing. slowly she rises, her feet no longer on the ground. Her hands drop to her side but her fingers splay out and dance to her song. She twirls with grace and rises, higher, higher, higher. And following her, little bodies of light, singing a song, only they remember. They swirl around the girl and kiss her cheeks, she smiles and slows to a stop, just hovering there, above the treetops. The fairies whisper in her ears and giggle holding out their little hands, expectant. The girl laughs, a beautiful, hypnotic sound. "Shh, my little friends, here you are. Quiet now. share, would you?" She hands them crumbs of cake, velvet and chocalate and all the flavors of the wonderful substance. The fairies smile and their tinkiling filles her ears. "Yes, i know. you won, you caught up to me - but it IS harder to be faster, seein how i'm bigger than you and all." they circle her head and perch on her shoulders "But soon i'll be faster than all of you. and not even the ancient peter pan could catch me!" she smiles with the thought and slowly drifs down to the forest once more. Waving goodbye to her little friends, she races again though the forest, her feet not touching the ground.

OR....


She shuffled her feet and sighed, making it quite obvious that she was upset. The caseworker didn't respond. Of course. Why would she? She was only uprooting her life again. Home-hopping wasn't fun. . She had been in what? Three homes in the past year? She tried to be good, be the best. But she obviously wasn't good enough. she must have done something wrong. Something must have made them not want her. She just didnt know why she wasn't good enough. She fiddled with her name tag, which read Aria, or it was supposed to, it actually spelled Area. Sighing again she tried for a more vocal approach.
"Ahem." She raised an eyebrow, trying to hide the sour sting in her heart. the caseworker finally looked up "What? You hungry? Thirsty?" She shook her head after a second "Just sit still, we will have you relocated soon enough." Relocated? Was she a dog? "I was just gonna ask why i have to leave another house." The caseworker sighed "Because of...Difficulties." Aria frowned thats all they ever said. "difficluties." She hadn't relized she said it out loud until the caseworked sighed louder than she had before. "Listen, it just didn't work out. You'll be in a new home soon." Aria clenched her jaw "It's not really a home when you only live there for four months." This time the caseworker ignored her. So Aria leaned back in her seat and closed her eyes. wringing her hands until they turned white.
When she opened them again the sky had turned to a pink shade, and she watched for a second as it slowly sank towards the ground. She glanced around and met the eyes of her annoyed caseworker, who obviously wanted to go home. "Get up. You're sleeping here toninght."
"What-?" Aria clenched her hands, digging her fingers into her palm.
"I said you're sleeping here." she jabbed a finger towards a room, the door was slightly ajar and inside was a table a couple chairs and a couch. Aria frowned "On a couch?" the caseworker nodded "I'll be in the next room."

please read it all and tell me which one was your favorite and why! :)

Answer:

theyre both amazing and it's hard to pick but the second one engaged me a little more <3

Explanation:

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Question 7 of 10
Which story element most clearly shows direct characterization?
O A. The way a character dresses
O B. The narrator's comments about a character's true nature
C. A character's private thoughts and feelings while alone
O D. How other characters act when a specific character is around
SUBMIT

Which of their daughters is Mr. Bennet’s alleged favorite and why?

Complete the chart which of these clues help you understand what the object means

What is Shakespeare trying to say about leadership? Who do you think the
best leader in the play was? What qualities make that character a
successful leader? Use examples from the text.

“The Great Depression” makes use of figurative language. How is the phrase “went sour” effective for describing bad loans?

what is George Orwell's purpose in writing?

Which writing approach would best address the purpose and audience of this
prompt?
Your social studies class has been learning how communication has
undergone vast changes since the invention of the printing press.
Please summarize these changes for a classmate who has been
absent for the entire unit on communication and will have to take a
unit exam when he or she returns to school.
O A. To help your classmate catch up quickly, use a graphic organizer
that compares communication in the past to communication in
the present with short, descriptive phrases.
B. To show your classmate how much you've learned, write a formal
essay that details every advancement in the field of
communication, making sure to include personal commentary on
each one
O C. To make learning enjoyable for your classmate, write a fictional
tale of a woman who is transported to the past and must try to
communicate without using modern technology
O D. To help your classmate learn the main developments in
communication, write concise, organized notes about the
background, technology, and people involved in each major
advancement

I need to know the answer

the word coherence means ______
A. to read clearly
B. to not understand
C. to stick to something
D.to be a free of thought​

ans. C

What meaning does the phrase “on the dot” in line 14 convey to the reader?

How does Katniss cook food for Peet's without fire?

how do people show inner strength?

ASAP! HELP ME I WILL MARK BRAINLIEST TO WHOEVER GETS IT RIGHT!
Hair and Clothes are a symbol of...
(from the book Lord Of The Flies)
A.Starvation
B.The level of savagery you are
C.Rank on the island from leader on down
D.The longing of the boys for their old life

why is it important to know the different special sewing hints for children dress ​

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Between the button hook and family reunion which text uses more figurative language

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people really just give out meetings on here?

Read these lines from Shel Silverstein’s poem Sick.

“I cannot go to school today,”
Said little Peggy Ann McKay.

What makes these two lines a couplet instead of just two lines from a poem?
a.They are very short.
b.They have a regular rhythm.
c.They are someone’s speech.
d.Their final syllables rhyme.

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By the time Mr. Tushman is talking about the Henry Ward Beecher medal, August is getting hungry and is zoning out. What causes August to start paying close attention to Mr. Tushman again?



A. August realized the ceremony was almost over.


B. He called August to come to get his award.


C. August wanted to see if Charlotte and Ximena would get yet another award.


D. Mr. Tushman started getting close to crying during his speech.


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What is the meaning of the word "abstractly" as used in the selection?
“they can quickly adjust, like in childhood ,building up new connections and getting rid of unused ones. But they are also starting to gain the adult ability to think abstractly. They can imagine future and make social connections,Galvan Said”

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Read "Not by Math Alone,” by Sandra Day O’Connor and Roy Romer. In a well-organized essay, analyze the rhetorical strategies the writers use to achieve their purpose. Is their argument persuasive?

What kind of gender expectation does Xiomara appear to have of Twin in the poem titled “Okay?” on page 54? Do you suspect any bias (preference for or against something or someone) from Xiomara?

What is the correct way to write the following sentences from the passage?

What I meant, Dad said, was that you should wear dress pants or a dress, or anything nice besides jeans. This is a concert, not a baseball game.

According to the poem, how do the animals and
children contrast?

this is from the Let Dogs Delight to Bark and Bite

The answer choices are:
A. Animals are made to fight each other but children are not.

B. Children are clam while animals are angry.

C. Both children and animals can get angry.

D. Animals are delightful and happy while children are passionate and angry.

Paragraph One
He drives a racecar 80 miles per hour. He motivates audiences of hundreds. He's earned awards for his performance on and off the racetrack, and he's traveled the country to compete. Did we mention that he's 13 years old? One look at his accomplishments and it is easy to see that Noah "Little Gator" Cornman is on the fast track to success. "Little" might be a part of his nickname, but it does not describe his determination to succeed and his heart to make a difference for kids like him.

In paragraph 1, which sentence implies that the author is impressed with the teen's accomplishments? (5 points)

a
He drives a racecar 80 miles per hour.

b
He motivates audiences of hundreds.

c
Did we mention that he's 13 years old?

d
He's traveled the country to compete.

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