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A few months ago when i was walking down the street i saw the crosswalks where wet with paint and some people walking around with paintbrushes, so i decided to see what was going on. They told me that they were doing sidewalk paintings, so i asked if i could join in and they said i could but i would have to put down some tape first. Once that was done i picked out a color and just did what i wanted to my 2 panels of sidewalk. When we were done for the day i got a really cool coupon for a craft store in appleton. I had a great time making friends and painting things for all to enjoy!

Answer:

At the beginning when you said a few months ago put the month to be more specific

Explanation:

Which of the following titles is
most likely an autobiography?
A. Where the Deer and the Antelope Play
B. Home, Home on the Range: My Year on a
Cattle Ranch
C. Home, Home on the Range: My Life on a
Cattle Ranch
D. Home, Home on the Range: A History of the
American West
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Read the closing from a formal e-mail.

Talk To You Later:

Which is the best way to revise the closing?

we real cool... which of the following identifies the central theme of the poem

Why does Jing-Mei feel like she doesn’t know her mother?

Abomination in a SIMPLE SENTENCE
(Please help)

What is the Web site's purpose? O to inform to persuade to entertain​

Choose one character from the myth "Atalanta, the Fleet-Footed Huntress" and

explain how and why that character changes over the course of the myth. Describe

at least one conflict that character faces. Use evidence from the text to support your

answer.

Editing is an important part of the journalistic process

PLEASE HELP!!! :(
I WILL MARK BRAINLIEST
‼️18 POINTS‼️


Which revision corrects the inappropriate shift in verb mood?

Evan got a job at the pet store down the street from his house. He thought he'd get to spend his days petting dogs and kittens and maybe learning how to wrap snakes around his neck like he'd seen in the movies. Did he find out that his job was more about cleaning dirty cages and trying to keep small children from poking the parrots? Once he'd been there a few weeks, he got pretty fast at cleaning the cages and saving kids' fingers, so he was finally able to spend some time with the cats and dogs. His
manager, however, still wouldn't let him play with the snakes.

A. Would he find out that his job was more about cleaning dirty cages
and trying to keep small children from poking the parrots?

B. Clean the dirty cages and keep the small children from poking the
parrots.

C. He finds out that his job was more about cleaning dirty cages and trying to keep small children from poking the parrots.

D. He found out, though, that his job was more about cleaning dirty
cages and trying to keep small children from poking the parrots.

What is the proper noun for The bakery makes lemon bars every Thursday.

heat is too dry as water vapor is to​

Can someone please recomend a tearpuller or heartfelt book to me? :D

1.Which sentence has an inappropriate shift in number?

A.The soccer players were thrilled when they won the local tournament.

B.When people enter a theater late, they should find their seats quickly.

C.When Jacob is having a bad day, they talk about it with a friend.

D.Children can make new friends when they join a club or sports team.

Which sentence has an inappropriate shift in person?

A.I like going to cooking class because I get to try new, unfamiliar dishes.

B.When I visited my aunt's farm, you could hear crickets chirping at night.

C.They were unhappy about the new rule, but they agreed to follow it.

D.When my dad was young, children spent more time outside than they do today.


2.Read the sentence containing a pronoun shift error.

Joe and Lucy presented his science project to the school.

Which sentence corrects the error?


A.Joe and Lucy presented its science project to the school.

B.Joe and Lucy presented your science project to the school.

C.Joe and Lucy presented her science project to the school.

D.Joe and Lucy presented their science project to the school.


3.Read the sentence containing a pronoun shift error.

When my dad was a kid, you played outside until the street lights came on.

Which sentence corrects the error?


A.When my dad was a kid, we played outside until the street lights came on.

B.When my dad was a kid, they played outside until the street lights came on.

C.When my dad was a kid, I played outside until the street lights came on.

D.When my dad was a kid, he played outside until the street lights came on.


4.Read the sentence containing a pronoun shift error.

When a baseball player practices, they go to the batting cage everyday.

Which sentence corrects the error?


A.When a baseball player practices, we go to the batting cage everyday.

B.When a baseball player practices, he goes to the batting cage everyday.

C.When a baseball player practices, it goes to the batting cage everyday.

D.When a baseball player practices, you go to the batting cage everyday.

Is telling the truth always necessary?

how were the boats that set sail thousands of years ago like modern spaceships ?
​

PLEASE HURRY WILL MARK BRAINLIEST Read the excerpt from The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street.

WOMAN ONE

(a little reluctantly)

Well . . . sometimes I go to bed late at night. A couple of times . . . a couple of times I'd come out on the porch and I'd see Mr. Goodman here in the wee hours of the morning standing out in front of his house . . . looking up at the sky.

(she looks around the circle of faces.)

That's right looking up at the sky as if . . . as if he were waiting for something.

(a pause)

As if he were looking for something.

There's a murmur of reaction from the crowd again.

How does Woman One’s claim about Les Goodman affect other elements in the story?

The neighbors become more sympathetic toward Les Goodman.
The neighbors become even more suspicious of Les Goodman.
The neighbors become less frightened of Les Goodman.
The neighbors become more protective of Les Goodman.

What is the length of a typical thesis statement?
A.
1 or 2 paragraphs
B.
3 to 5 sentences
C.
the entire introduction
D.
1 to 2 sentences

What does the suffix -able mean?

capable of being

cause or become

the action of

full of

Question 1 of 10

Choose the topic sentence that best fits this process paragraph. Before you start, you should purchase a sky chart with labeled constellations. Go to a dark area of the countryside, where there are few streetlights and other unnatural light, and take a flashlight. Then, orient yourself to the proper direction and use your flashlight and sky chart to identify the stars and constellations you can see. Soon, you won't even have to use the chart to recognize what you see at night.​

Fill In The Blanks
( Convenience , Dispatches , Conveyance , Proceeds , Constantly )


Moana was waiting for the last ____________ to arrive . Her aunt had promised that half the ____________ from the sale of her house would go to charity . Mona was worried that if she would miss the last ______________ available to the hostel . She kept ____________ looking at the clock on the wall and sat down with a sigh , her _____________ was the last priority for anyone

I sat in the Chair. what is the preposition?​

Which of these words would be used to refer to a young child's walk when
she is first learning how to walk?
O A. Tottering
B. Striding
O C. March
O D. Limping

answer correctly pls

How does the conflict in the Animal Farm excerpt
relate to the events in the historical passage?
O Snowball's quick escape under the hedge is similar
to how Stalin was expelled.
O Snowball's ideas about work relate to the Stalin's
efforts to gain total control.
O Napoleon removes Snowball for his own purposes
just as Stalin removed those in his own party.
O Snowball's dream for the animals on the farm is the
same as the dream of the Communist Party.

c. Which of the following modal verbs indicates necessity?
a) may
b) can
c) would
d) must

Why do you think we still tell tales of Lincoln's commitment to fairness?

help me out with this please ​

Application of career management model
Summary of Preferred work
1. Components of PWE
2. Tasks and activities more interesting to you
3. Significant talents you want to express at work
4. Importance of independence at work
5. Importance of job security
6. Relationship between work and other parts of life
7. Physical work setting.

Schools must ensure certain rights, accommodations
and protective measures for sexual assault victims
only if they choose to report to law enforcement.

True
False

Explanatory Essay: What is the relationship between literature and place?