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When most people are ill with a non-life-threatening condition, he will most often see a
General Practitioner. These doctors generally work in the local community in surgeries rather
than hospitals, so they are convenient for people to see for a consultation. However, other GPs
can working in a very wide range of areas, such as in hospitals, in education and for insurance
companies.
As the name suggests, GPs are doctors that does not have a specialty, such as a brain
surgeon or cancer specialist: they are able to diagnose and treat all the possible disease and
problems that one of their patients might have. They can treat and manage most illnesses and
perform some minor surgeries in there practice. Then for more serious cases they ill refer the
patient to a specialist that works in a hospital.
If you are ill and need to see a GP, you will normally need to make an appointment.
Sometimes you can just walk into the surgery and see a doctor, but that is not very likely as
GPs are normally very busy and all their appointment times are fully booked. Often you have to
wait several hour if not at least one of two days before you can get an appointment with a GP. If
you are to ill to wait, you have to go to a hospital and visit the accident and emergency
department.
GPs also make house-calls. These is when the GP comes to your house to treat you or
see a patient. Most often a GP has to make house-calls to see elderly people who cannot get to
the surgery easily. They might be ill and need to doctor to give him medicine or it could be that
the GP just want to check on them and make sure that they are ok.lf you are ill, the doctor will
normally prescribe you some medicine and tell you to go away for a little days before you go
back and visit them again if you have not started to get better. The GP will also explain how you
can have a better lifestyle that could prevent you from becoming ill in the rest place. They will
normally recommend that you stop to smoke cigarettes, not to drink alcohol and to get exercise
Once you have your prescription you will need to visit a pharmacy to get the medicine the doctor
prescribed for you.
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Answer:

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Corrections:

When most people are ill with a non-life-threatening condition, he will most often see a General Practitioner. These doctors generally work in the local community in surgeries rather than hospitals, so they are convenient for people to see for a consultation. However, other GPs can work in a very wide range of areas, such as in hospitals, in education, and for insurance

companies. As the name suggests, GPs are doctors that do not have a specialty, such as a brain surgeon or cancer specialist: they are able to diagnose and treat all the possible diseases and problems that one of their patients might have. They can treat and manage most illnesses and perform some minor surgeries in their practice. Then for more serious cases, they will refer the patient to a specialist that works in a hospital. If you are ill and need to see a GP, you will normally need to make an appointment. Sometimes you can just walk into the clinic and see a doctor, but that is not very likely as GPs are normally very busy and all their appointment times are fully booked. Often you have to wait several hours if not at least one of two days before you can get an appointment with a GP. If you are too ill to wait, you have to go to a hospital and visit the accident and emergency department. GPs also make house calls. This is when the GP comes to your house to treat you or see a patient. Most often a GP has to make house calls to see elderly people who cannot get to the surgery easily. They might be ill and need to doctor to give them medicine or it could be that the GP just wants to check on them and make sure that they are ok. if you are ill, the doctor will normally prescribe you some medicine and tell you to go away for a few days before you go back and visit them again if you have not started to get better. The GP will also explain how you can have a better lifestyle that could prevent you from becoming ill in the resting place. They will normally recommend that you stop smoking cigarettes, not drink alcohol, and get exercise. Once you have your prescription you will need to visit a pharmacy to get the medicine the doctor prescribed for you.

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When most individuals become unwell with a non-life-threatening ailment, they will almost always consult a physician.

   Practitioner of General Medicine These doctors often operate in private practices rather than hospitals, making them more accessible to the public for consultations. Other GPs, on the other hand, can operate in a broad variety of settings, including hospitals, education, and insurance firms.

   As the name implies, general practitioners are physicians who do not have a specialist, such as brain surgery. A surgeon or cancer specialist can diagnose and treat any disease or condition that one of their patients may have. They can treat and managing most diseases. They conduct a variety of minor surgical procedures throughout their business. Then, in more critical situations, they will send the patient to a hospital-based expert. If you are unwell and want medical attention, you will often need to schedule an appointment.

   Occasionally, you may go into the operation and see a doctor immediately, but this is not very frequent. GPs are often quite busy, with all available appointment times fully filled. Often, you must wait many hours, if not one or two days, to see a doctor. If you are unable to wait, you must attend a hospital's emergency department.

   Additionally, physicians conduct house visits. This is when a doctor visits you at home to treat you or to see a patient. Frequently, a GP must make house calls to see elderly patients who are unable to go to the hospital. They may be unwell and require medical attention, or the GP may simply want to check up on them and ensure that they are fine. If you are unwell, the doctor will often prescribe medication and advise you to wait a few days before returning.

   If you have not yet begun to improve, Additionally, the GP will discuss how you may improve your lifestyle to avoid being unwell in the first place. They will often advise you to quit smoking, abstain from drinking, and increase your physical activity. Once you receive your prescription, you must visit a pharmacy to obtain the medication ordered by your doctor.

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A.
It is a different world down there, in the deep, dark, bottom of the ocean.
B.
Sometimes an animal use its light to confuse and more easily catch its prey.
C.
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D.
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a.
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b.
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c.
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Nights and Dragons—
From the memoir of author Abigail Prynne

I could have given up, but I thought about my grandmother. She always told me that "people who believe that science is the answer to everything are missing out on everything else." With her words in mind, I searched some more. There were many facts that hinted that dragons may not be fictional. I noticed that cultures across the world all described dragons in similar ways. This was odd because they had no way to communicate with each other. I found dragons mentioned in more than just stories. They appeared in old legal papers, in the travel logs of Marco Polo, and in the Bible. I saw that the Chinese calendar uses a different animal each year. Dragons are included along with eleven real animals. I began to believe it was a real possibility that all of these people were talking about a creature that actually existed.


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Dragons are real because all the other animals on the calendar are real.

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