Answer:
I think the second one! Hope it helps!!
Based on the following quotes who are NOT working well in the group?
A. “I’m sorry, I don’t understand your idea. Can you explain it again?”
B. “I don’t think that is a good idea. While I see your point, I don’t think we have enough time.”
C. “Whatever you guys want is fine.”
D. “I really like your idea. It should work. Let’s do it!"
Answer: C.
Explanation:
They are showing a lack of effort.
Answer:
C
Explanation:
I think that's the answer
Read an essay about Edgar Allan Poe's story "The Black Cat" and look for weaknesses in the writing. Describe how the writer should revise the word, and edit the essay for errors in capitalization, spelling, and punctuation.
Explanation:
Phrases to be corrected:
-"The story revolves around the psychology of guilt and a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it."
The most concrete idea would be:
The story revolves around the psychology of a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it.
-"This article will analyze the issue of violence as it is contained in history".
It could be corrected as the following:
"This article will analyze what influenced the narrator to become a violent man and what the consequences were."
A correct punctuation must be made in the following paragraph:
"These animals included dogs, apes, and even donkeys. The theme of violence is also portrayed when the narrator, realizing his mistake, turns on himself and begins to hurt himself with the knife that he always carried with him."
The first stanza is a continuity of the idea from the previous paragraph, therefore it must be in the previous paragraph with a period followed.
In the following paragraph we can make some editorial corrections as well as punctuation:
"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. The theme of loyalty also shows up when the narrator gouges his cat's eye out. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him."
We can see in the previous paragraph that the subject of loyalty begins to be discussed, therefore it is not necessary for the writer of the essay to say again "the subject of loyalty is also shown ..." it could be said "We can quote a example when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye ".
The last paragraph, as it is a continuity of the previous paragraph where the writer continues talking about loyalty, must continue that idea in the previous paragraph with a period followed.
Therefore, there should be a single paragraph where it is not necessary to repeat the word "the issue of loyalty" but only leave the word "loyalty" because it is already known that that issue has been discussed. Therefore, they could be as follows:
"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. An example we can cite is when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him, and loyalty is represented by the cat himself. After the narrator gouged out the cat's eye, the cat was still playing with the narrator after the pierced eye sock had healed. Under normal circumstances, the cat would have fled the house and moved to another house away from the brutality."
Answer:
(The essay I used is underneath the last question)
1. Where does the writer stray from the topic? What could be done to fix this problem? Explain what you would cut and cross it out in the text of the essay.
I do not believe MuffinAlien strays away from the gothic topic in her essay. I think she did a great job describing Edgar Allen Poe's writing.
2. What misunderstandings or inaccuracies involving Gothic literature or Poe's use of suspense do you see? How would you suggest eliminating this problem? If necessary, cross out some words within the text of the essay.
I do not think there are any misunderstandings or inaccuracies in gothic writing, Poe's story, or the essay that MuffinAlien wrote. However, I will say I do have a small opinion. When writing a gothic based story, or maybe even any story depending on who you ask, people use more complex words, making sentences longer to make it seem like time is moving slowly in the story. I do not think it's effective for what it's for. This may be very biased because it's my personal opinion, but it makes it harder for me to understand the plot of the story. Instead of making the story more interesting because the time is being slowed, it makes it more boring because the time is too slow, and then I'm not interested in reading anymore. This is the reason why I do not enjoy gothic stories.
3. Where does the writer fail to support her points with evidence? What evidence from the story would you suggest adding to support these points?
MuffinAlien doesn't fail to support her points with evidence. Every example MuffinAlien told, she gave a quote to go with it.
4. Read the essay again and edit it for errors. Find and fix as many spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors as you can. Pay special attention to the errors you learned about in the lesson, but look for other types of errors as well. You may write your edits directly into the essay.
I do not believe that there is anything wrong with the essay MuffinAlien wrote, but i suppose i wouldn't get a good grade if i didn't do much on this essay, so i'll try my best to fix it somehow.
Gothic writing is marked by the suspense of not knowing what will happen next in a story. Great Gothic writers like Edgar Allan Poe move beyond simple techniques to build suspense. His stories are more than the usual "It was a dark and stormy night." In his popular Gothic story, "The Black Cat," you can see Poe effectively using clear narrative choices to build suspense. How he holds back information and controlled pacing develops the narrator's character are both two good examples of how he does it.
Holding back information is the first way Poe builds suspense. As the story begins, the narrator is clearly addressing an audience. He says it in a way as if he knows us already. It says at the very beginning of the story, "But to-morrow I die, and to-day I will empty my soul." This statement is so extreme that anyone who would stumble onto these words would be attached, wondering what's going to happen next. None of the questions flowing through the reader's mind are answered until much later in the story. The now-curious reader must read along.
Along with this, Poe effectively controls the pacing of the story to which also builds suspense. Whenever the action becomes intense and the narrator becomes excited or violent, the sentences are either short or very choppy. For example, “...They left no nook or corner unexplored. At length, for the third or fourth time, they descended into the cellar. I trembled not in a muscle. My heart beats calmly as that of one who slumbers in innocence…” These sentences are short, direct, and choppy, creating more suspension. When Poe wants to create the illusion that time is passing more slowly; he uses longer and more complex sentences that must be read more carefully and slowly. For example, “To those who have cherished an affection for a faithful and wise dog, I need hardly be at the trouble of explaining the nature or the intensity of the satisfaction, therefore available. There is something in the unselfish and self-sacrificing love of a savage, which goes directly to the heart of him who has had frequent occasions to test the small friendship and cobweb loyalty of basic Man.” These sentences are very long, showing that time is passing very slowly.
Poe creates suspense in the story by using more complex tools and narrative choices than just setting the story on a stormy night in a haunted house or middle age castle. He holds back information and carefully controls the pacing. These narrative choices are so effective that we're still reading Poe's stories more than 150 years after they were first published.
Explanation:
This is what I wrote :)
I got this essay from another user on Brainly named MuffinAlien. She posted her essay under a different question, but it was the same topic.
Thank you MuffinAlien <3
Suppose you are the coordinator of the organizing committee for the"Sports Week"at your school.Write an email inviting the other members of the committee for the first time.
Answer:
To : Jack.bite98
cc : Kate.narrow23
tyshona
John.brown
Subject : Invitation for committee meeting
Dear friends,
All of you are hereby informed that we are organizing sports week in our school. As the members of the sports committee, I am organizing our first ever meeting to talk about the arrangements and distribution of responsibilities.
Kindly be at the school hall at 12:30 Thursday.
Some people think that learning English at a very young age may increase the stress levels of students. What do you think about that?
Answer:
Explanation:
There's no scientific explanation to prove this but I think the earlier the better.
(a) This is a new English grammar book. (What) AA
Answer:
Language Arts.
Explanation:
Please define your question next time :)
what is the purpose of a society's oral tradition?
A. To validate a king's power
B. To pass on understanding of values and culture.
C. To make sure the right person gets credit for making up stories.
D. To persuade others to join a culture.
Answer:
B
Explanation:
Oral tradition refers to stories and tales that are told throughout the society. Also known as spreading info/cultural beliefs by word of mouth
Answer:
To pass on understanding of values and culture.
Explanation:
B is correct one.
What is the meaning of freedom ? ( in big terms, very descriptive)
Answer:
Freedom is the quality or state of being free . Such as : being able to have rights for using water , being able to participate in different programs, being able to fulfill the needs etc. Freedom is the most necessity that a human being needs and deserves.
Prompt: In your opinion, are more people today protectors of nature or destroyers of nature? Answer the
question in the form of a full-length essay. Be sure to support your response with evidence from stories,
movies, real world events, or experiences from your life.
Plzzzz helpppp
This essay requires you to express your opinion about the amount of people defending or destroying nature. As opinion is very personal, I can't write the essay for you, but I'll show you how to write it.
First, you should analyze whether you think there are more people protecting nature or more people harming it. You should look for information and facts to help you think about it.
Furthermore, you can reflect on the fact that, despite the fact that there are many NGOs and activists working in favor of the environment, environmental degradation continues to increase. Is it because more people destroy nature or because more powerful people exploit nature unsustainably?
After these reflections you will write your essay as follows:
Introduction: Present what environmental degradation is, the need to protect the environment and your opinion on whether there are more people protecting or degrading the environment. This opinion is your thesis statement and is the position you will take in the text. Remember that the introduction must be done in a small paragraph.Body: Write two paragraphs. In the first paragraph show how environmental degradation has decreased or increased as time progresses. Provide facts and evidence about this. In the second paragraph, show who is more influential in dealing with nature, activists or nature explorers. Provide facts and evidence about this.Conclusion: Reinforce your opinion presented in the thesis statement based on the data you presented in the body of the essay. Also, present your perspectives on this subject and how you expect it to develop in the future.You can find more information on how to write an essay at the link below:
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Which is the right answer
Adverbial Clauses Of Concession
Answer:
well it sounds much better with although I'm a rich man I always get what I want.
Explanation:
this is my opinion and not sure if it's correct.
Answer:
I always get what I want
Explanation:
What you're trying to say is "Although I'm not a rich man,.....", there has to be something what you don't get everyday but what a rich man does. And what is that? Rich people get whatever they want. The correct answer would be "Although I'm not a rich man, I always get what I want.
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3 facts about the Achievement Gap;
Answer:
Explanation:
Low-income and black and Hispanic students are less likely to graduate from high school, less likely to enroll in college, and less likely to graduate from college.
Answer:
Explanation: The “achievement gap” in education refers to the disparity in academic performance between groups of students. The achievement gap shows up in grades, standardized-test scores, course selection, dropout rates, and college-completion rates, among other success measures.
It's a beautiful day outside, birds are singing, flowers are blooming (continue)
Answer: y hay chicos jugando afuera
Explanation:
6 6) write a poem using the following words: Ice, neccessans, jungle, dream
Answer:
l have a dream
I have a dream
One day my life
will turn to ice
It is necessary
I shall not live with my fate to be decided by a roll of a dice.
"THANK YOU "
Answer:
bhaisab chutiagiri mat karo
Essay about our culture,our identity
Every single person has his own unique identity. So, the culture in which he is brought up has impact on one's entire life. ... People acquire the knowledge of language, costumes, food and social norms and values.
Answer:
I HOPE THE ABOVE INFORMATION WILL HELP YOU A LOT.
WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST!
Rewrite each sentence using correct capitalization, end punctuation and adding commas where needed.
1. we send food medicine and supplies to many countries overseas such as ethiopia and thailand
2. janice michael henry and denise often go skating at the oldtown skating rink on monday nights
3. "john played saxophone for the band" said ms. smith
4. "let's go swimming in the pond" paul said, "and then we can warm up by the fire
Answer:
1. We send food, medicine and supplies to many countries overseas such as Ethiopia and Thailand
2. Janice, Michael, Henry and Denise often go skating at the Oldtown skating rink on Monday nights.
3. "John played the saxophone for the band said Ms. Smith."
4. "Lets go swimming in the pond Paul said," "and then we can warm up by the fire".
Explanation:
[EASY] What is the definition of happiness?
Answer:
a feeling and an emotion of unlimited and unrelenting joy
Answer:
Brainliest pls
Explanation:
the state of being happy.
Happiness is a sense of well-being, joy, or contentment. When people are successful, safe, or lucky, they feel happiness. The "pursuit of happiness" is something this country is based on, and different people feel happiness for different reasons.
The old lady took the ______ to go from the first floor to the basement since she is unable to walk.
(1) stairs
(2) steps
(3) elevator
(4) conveyor
Answer:
3. Elevator
Explanation:
The elevator is an automatic system that allows the old lady to not strain herself.
A. disease B. cancer C. sickness D. visit
Answer:
What is the question?
Explanation:
Which of the following is an example of personification?
A. I never would have trusted him if I had known he'd turn out to be a
Judas.
O B. He started by eating all of the lobster in Maine and then washed it
down with a bathtub-sized glass of soda.
C. That old apron told hundreds of stories; it spoke of family dinners
and long days in front of a stove.
D. We all laughed as Maggie stood there turning redder than a ripe
tomato.
Answer:
C
Explanation:
Personification is when you write about an object acting like a person. An apron can't actually tell stories, but the writer told it like that.
Answer:A
ExplanationA:
Bài 7: Khoanh tròn đáp án đúng.
1.My mother told me to (put/ get) on warm clothes before I went out
2. Jim really (got/ put) me down when he forgot my birthday.
3. My father never (tells/ drops) me off but my mother is always shouting at me.
4. I couldn’t believe she (turned/ got) down my invitation for the second time.
5. My mother often lets me (look/ take) after my younger brother.
6. “Why did she (break/ stay) up with you?”“She said I didn’t care much about her”.
7. Please (drop/ tell) me off in front of the theater.
8. We’ve been (saving/ looking) up to travel to New York this summer.
9. Have you (take/ put) out clean towels for the guests?
10. (Take/ Dress) off your rain coat before you come in.
11. I remember (paying/ looking) Jim back but he kept asking me for his money.
12. Jim’s poor test results (got/ looked) his parents down.
13. grandmother (died/ passed) away before I was born.
14. I have many tasks to (attend/ took) to.
15. Who does this bag (belong/ own) to?
Bài 8: Hoàn thành các câu dưới đây bằng cách điền tiểu từthích hợp vào chỗ trống.
1.We will set _________for Tokyo in the next few hours.
2. Everyone says that Jim takes _________his father but I think he is more like his mother.
3. Who will take _________your position when you are on parental leave?
4. There are four of us so Peter cuts the cake _________four pieces.
5. I am going to buy a new bike, so I put my old one _________.
6. Remember to put the trash _________before the garbage truck comes.
7. You must take _________yourhat before you come intoa temple.
8. I hate the way my manager shuts me _________when she disagrees with me.
9. What are you looking _________ ? My car keys.
10. Watch _________for the dog. Everyone says that it is a fierce dog.
Answer:
8-5
Explanation:
describe this picture
Answer:
The picture shows how the kids play in the past then the modern
Explanation:
In the past, before technology was not that popular as it is today kids used to play outside with their friends. Now (before the pandemic) kids like to play video games not playing outside because of technology rising in fame.
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How was science fiction writing considered a reaction to the advancements in technology?
Answer:
Science fiction literature has affected society significantly. It has inspired many to pursue careers in science which has, in turn, resulted in advancements in technology such as the developments in cloning, rockets, artificial intelligence, satellites, wireless internet, etc.
Science fiction reacted to mechanical advances by envisioning its societal suggestions, reflecting trusts, fears, and moral concerns, and forming viewpoints.
How was science fiction writing considered a reaction to the advancements in technology?Science fiction has risen as a reaction to quick mechanical progressions, reflecting society's interests, trusts, and fears. Creators imagined potential results, investigating moral, social, and philosophical measurements of development.
By anticipating envisioned prospects, they hooked with humanity's advancing relationship with innovation, advertising cautionary stories and idealistic dreams that challenged winning standards and philosophies.
This sort of gives an inventive space to look at the effect of logical advance on human presence, empowering basic reflection on the potential benefits and perils of advancement, eventually impacting open talk and forming discernments of mechanical alter.
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essay:the best time of the year
Answer:
A Little Christmas DinnerChristmas is the time of year renowned for bringing families together in a way no other holiday can quite muster up to. Family togetherness feels like a cup of hot chocolate on the first cold night of the year; heart warming. That magical day when relatives flock from all over to be in one house, at one table, and to eat one meal, nothing is more special than a little Christmas dinner.
Christmas is known for coming quicker and quicker each passing year. Many people begin to silently panic as soon as they hear the first Christmas song on the radio. To me it strikes into my head that our yearly family Christmas dinner is ever so close. As a child I enjoyed the Christmas dinner but not for the wholesome heart warming reasons that echo through my words now, but for the greedy natured presents. Admittedly the presents still are a highlight of the Christmas dinner, but after a few seasoned years of learning that Christmas is not about materialistic items I now feel that the Christmas dinner is the best part of this day.
Every year we have the dinner at my grand parent’s quant house in the country. It takes a few hours to get there, but the country ride is more mesmerizing than any movie that I have ever seen. The twists and turns on a single lane road surrounded by tree’s help set the tone for what the day will bring. Every year I am always the first one there to help my grandparents to set up. The first thing I always remember to do is hug each one of them for as long as I can, thankful for another year to take in their open arms.
I hope this will help you if not then sorry i have tried my best :)Answer: Here's a format
Summer;
Thesis statement: Summer is often the least stressful and most relaxed time of the year.
Explain what you do with free time and hobbies
Pleasant weather
Less stress over school
Explanation:
Your employer is considering adding a group term life insurance plan to the employee benefit package. The premium cost would be fully paid by the organization. Explain how this will impact: the employees' net pay the employer's payroll costs
Answer:
The most likely thing that would happen is the employee's pay getting cut by a lil, and the employer's payroll cost would go a bit, but then the company employee's would have a life insurance
Explanation:
Question 6 of 10
Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow
and writing style of a story?
A. As he walked through the dark forest, Javi stepped on a dry twig. It
made an echoing "crack." He looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees, so he walked on.
B. Javi walked through the dark forest, and he stepped on a dry twig.
It made an echoing 'crack," and he looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees, so he walked on
C. As he walked through the dark forest, Javi stepped on a dry twig.
Because it made an echoing "crack," he looked left and right. When
he saw no movement among the trees, he walked on.
D. Javi walked through the dark forest. He stepped on a dry twig. It
made an echoing 'crack." He looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees. He walked on.
COMPLETE THE SENTENCE USING THE CORRECT VEBR BE-AM-IS-ARE ANNY------------------------------A GOOD STUDENT
My shoes need cleaning. *
a)Cleaning is needed for my shoes.
b)I have to clean my shoes.
c)I need to have my shoes cleaned.
d)I need to clean my shoes.
Dave / pressed / because of / parents/ high expectation / study results. *
a)Dave was pressed despite of his parents’ high expectation of his study results.
b)Dave was pressed because of his parents have high expectation of his study results.
c)Dave was pressed because of his parents’ high expectation of his study results.
d)Dave was pressed in spite of his parents’ high expectation of his study results.
We must take care of all living species on Earth. *
a)All living species on Earth are taken care of by us.
b)All living species on Earth must be taken care of by us.
c)ll living species on Earth had been taken care of by us.
d)All living species on Earth will be taken care of by us.
Answer:
1. c
2. d
3. b
Explanation:
These sentences would make the most sense.
Answer:
Cleaning is needed for my shoes
Explanation:
i hope it is correct
can you tell me what are the metaphors in John Keats poem please
Answer:Keats uses here two elaborated metaphors: one of the imagination as a charioteer who can fly into the heavens and "do strange deeds / Upon the clouds" (evidently a reference to the imagination's creative func tion), and one of poetry itself as being a planet of sound, rolling through the heavens.
how do supporting details reinforce the central idea in this passage?
A.The supporting details explain criticisms against new artificial limbs.
B.The supporting details help the reader understand how artificial limbs work.
C.The supporting details give evidence that cheetahs are the animals best designed for running.
D.The supporting details show why new designs for artificial limbs are better than old designs.
Answer:
B.The supporting details help the reader understand how artificial limbs work.
Explanation:
Soccer is the most widely played game in the world.
Which is the preposition in this sentence?
Answer:
The answer is probably in.
Explanation:
They....a new computer ( to get )
a) be going to b) will
Answer.
They will go to get a new computer
Explanation.