Law High School

Please help, I will give brainliest. I need more than one answer.



I am going to begin law school soon but I decided to write an opening statement to see if I am good or not. Sorry if it’s a bit all over the place but i tried. I just want to know your opinion.


Here it is



Diabetic Coma in Car Court Session
Law(s) broken : Driving Without License
Hello, the case I’m presenting to the court is for John and Jane Doe. This case is because Jane Doe drove her husband home because he was having a diabetic seizure in the car and his wife stopped the car and was in the process of driving him to the car when a police officer stopped them. I would like to start off with addressing that it is legal to break the law of murder. One of the biggest law as it includes taking a human’s life. It is legal to break that law if, and only if by breaking the law you save a human life or defend yourself. In this case the witness broke a law because their husband was having a diabetic coma. At most time during this case if there is only a single person in the car and that very person has a diabetic coma, it could cause destruction of property, a chain reaction car crash, and even the person’s life could be lost. Since there were 2 people in the car Ms. Jane stopped the car and was in the process of driving him to the hospital when a police officer stopped them. In the video she took you can see her and in the corner the navigation is set to the nearest hospital. I have asked for the body cam footage to present as deeper evidence and they agreed. Even in the body cam footage you can see that as well. There have been many cases in which the following case has been presented to the court in various different situations and have been exempted and excused of all charges. The law is to protect the people of America and have order, but in this case the law could cause a human life to be lost instead. Your honor, I believe that we can agree that the laws were set to protect the lives of Americans and to have order. What kind of order is there when you have about 5 families who have a loved one or even worse their entire family who has died, simply because of one person. The laws are meant to being justice to Americans, but what kind of justice is there in multiple people dying because of one man who didn’t even know what was happening. Thanks to Ms. Jane that didn’t happen, thanks to Ms. Jane, the possibility of that day being known as the day that many people lost their lives and all because one man who’s wife simply turned a blind eye to even though he was having a diabetic coma. But instead she followed the law even though she knew it would mean having many human lives lost. Possibly even hers. So I stand here in front of the court not asking you to rule for me, but instead to put yourself in the situation. What will you do, break the law to save other people. Or stand with the law even though it means you will probably end up killing others. Your honor, I don’t think there is much more to say. So with that, I rest my case. Hoping that this is enough to suit the court.

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Answer 1
This is a very well educated opening statement for someone who has not graduated law school! So congrats! My only adjustments would be these:

1- when you address the court to begin your statements please keep in mind the that this is not a casual conversation. Try something like “Your honor” *and then begin* or something along those lines.

2- remove anything that would sway the jury in an emotional way. Although this is a valid issue, you need to be sure they approach this with a common sense mindset. So stick to the facts and do not try to build a sob story :)

3- Like i mentioned earlier, this was very good and well written. I would personally not make so many repetitions in your statements to which you would sound unprofessional. That is the last thing you want.

4- one of the most helpful things to master is to replace any words with other words or statements that make your argument more solid. Professionalism is key!!

Good luck!

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