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Fawn was a member of a peaceful tribe who cared for the forest and all of the unique creatures that dwelled there. the tribe was hidden away from the dystopian outside world, until they day it found them. On the night before her seventh birthday the kings' soliders arrived bringing destruction with them. they first ripped plants from the soil, and then captured many terrified animals. Ravaging flames then consumed the forest entirely. The forest was decimated in the fire along with everyone Fawn cared for. Her tears reflected the pouring rain that slowly put out the fire. By time she was seven Fawn was alone. All she had left was the insignia etched pendant her parents gave her before pushing her through a portal that just outside the forest. She cleared the tears from her face, looked at the pendant and vowed to never let harm come to anyone or anything while she was around.

Answer: Don't say portal

Explanation: When I read the word portal it made it sound like a story for a kindergartener instead put "they pushed her out of the flames reach" or something similar to that. Maybe a bit more detail about Fawn and how she lived and why the King came to the forest. Other than that it is a great story.

Answer:

after dwelled there, capitalize the T in the. after seventh b day, put a comma. a comma after arrived. Capitalize T in they. All she had left was the insignia etched pendant her parents gave her before pushing her through a portal that LAY just outside the forest.

Explanation:

Nice story, really like it. Very detailed.

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Which excerpt from "The Most Dangerous Game" is an example of foreshadowing?
"Can't see it," remarked Rainsford, trying to peer through the dank tropical night that was palpable as it pressed its thick warm blackness in upon the yacht.
Who cares how a jaguar feels? The world is made up of two classes--the hunters and the huntees. Luckily, you and I are hunters.
I hope the jaguar guns have come from Purdey's. We should have some good hunting up the Amazon.
I've seen you pick off a moose moving in the brown fall bush at four hundred yards, but even you can't see four miles or so through a moonless Caribbean night."

Under line the examples of "radiation"
"light bulb giving off heat"
"cuddling with your warm dog"
"feeling heat while standing by campfire"
"smoke rising from a fire"
"sun heating a car"
"cooking pancakes in a pan"

To prepare for the test, Andrew takes notes and studied.

Which answer corrects the error in verb tense?

Question 1 options:

To prepare for the test, Andrew took notes and studied.


To prepare for the test, Andrew was taking notes and is studying.


To prepare for the test, Andrew took notes and is studying.


To prepare for the test, Andrew takes notes and will study.

At Cindy's birthday each guest will get one-third of a medium sized pizza. There
will be 12 people at the party, including Cindy. How many pizza's does her mom
need?

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Which shared psychological traits can advertisers use to influence buying decisions? (Select all correct answers.)

1. the need for belonging
2. empathy toward others
3. natural curiosity
4. the desire to be remembered

9. Lady Macbeth greets Duncan
A. with undisguised jealousy and ambition
B. and advises him on affairs of his kingdom
C. as a perfect hostess would greet a guest
D.with news of Macbeth's failure to arrive

How does the speaker structure this part of the argument? Match each sentence to what it accomplishes. Match Term Definition Picture this: It's Spring Break, and you fly off to some country where there's lush rainforests and beautiful, blue coastlines to explore. A) State the claim of the argument There's also people in need, so you decide to blend your vacation with volunteering. B) Recognize the counterclaim Volunteering as a tourist, or voluntourism, seems like a great way to explore new regions and help people at the same time. C) Establish a problem with the counterclaim However, this D) Get the audience's attention While many teens might view traveling and volunteering abroad as a worthwhile adventure, there are more genuine and effective ways to make a difference. E) Establish the topic

Read the summary paragraph for the article on service and answer the question that follows:
Service improves society, impacting the helpers as wel as those neoding assistance.It means being an active partcjpant in one's community, taking action
where it can be of benefit. Every person should make it a prionity to serve at least two
hours per week. It's an extremely important civic responsibility that is
invaluable to citizens most in need. Service creates improved comnmunities where people care about each other.

Which of the following makes a true statement about good summaries?

Good summaries include the writer's opinion on the article.

Good summaries focus on the support details from the body.

Good summaries provide all the data an author uses for support.

Good summaries objectively restate the thesis and crucial details.

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What should the body of an essay contain in each paragraph?
A. one topic sentence and three supporting detail sentences
B. four supporting detail sentences about the topic
OC. three topic sentences and one supporting sentence
D two topic sentences and two supporting sentences

Compare and contrast the characters of Rowan and Citra up to this point in the book. How do their character traits make either of them a better fit for being a scythe?

What book contain laws, commandments and rules by which we build a just and free society.

What effect does this speech have on George, Sam, and Rameck? They are shocked to hear about the varied quality of care. They are inspired and determined to make a difference. They are confused and eager to make sense of the situation. They are skeptical and quick to question the speaker.

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change into passive voice

It this excerpt were made into a movie, which adaptation
would best allow the director to comment on current
politics?
Read the excerpt from Hamlet.
Voltimand:.On Fortinbras; which he, in brief, obeys,
Receives rebuke from Norway, and, in tine,
Makes vow before his uncle never more
To give the assay of arms against your majesty.
Whereon old Norway, overcome with joy,
Gives him three thousand crowns in annual fee,
And his commission to employ those soldiers,
So levied as before, against the Polack;
With an entreaty, herein further shown, [Giving a pper.]
O updating the setting to a modern city
O changing the costumes to modern fashion
O replacing the outdated terms with slang
O using actors with diferent ethnicities

Chapter 1: Beliefs and Teach
The following statements are muddled up. Add them in the correct order to the flowchart
below, to retell the story of Creation as described in Genesis chapters 2 and 3.
Adam and Eve lived in a garden full of wonderful trees and plants
They disobeyed God's command and ate from the tree
God told Adam and Eve not to eat from the tree of the knowledge
of good and evil
Adam and Eve became afraid and hid from God
God created the universe including the first humans, Adam and Eve
Adam and Eve had to leave the garden
Adam and Eve were tempted by the snake to eat from the forbidden tree
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why do anne and peter have different perspectives on their star? what does this tell you about anne? diary of anne frank

In which sentence is the word habitual used as it is listed in the dictionary entry?
He habitual jogged the same path through the park.
Each morning the man and woman eat their habitual breakfast in the diner.
It is apparent that it is her habitual to sing while painting.
It seems everyone is willing to put up with the habitual of the neighbor's gossip.

Which of the following sentences does not have parallel structure?
Group of answer choices

Both of these.

None of these.

Either I will or I won’t.

I hope to vacation either in Spain or Ireland.

Using the sentence context, determine the meaning of the word "copious" in the following example.
Given that Arturo has read more than 23 books about volcanoes, his knowledge about the eruption of Mount
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abundant
limited
impressive

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What are two characteristics of expository text?

Why is it important to express love and affection to young children?

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3. Which technique increases the emotional impact of rhetoric?
symbolism
irony
connotative language
denotative language

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Which lines are written in iambic pentameter? Select 2 options.

The smoke of my own breath
And what I assume you shall assume
I never saw a moor
Yet certain am I of the spot
And summer's lease hath all too short a date
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st