Select the correct text in the passage.
Which sentence can the author improve by simplifying it?
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Community Gardens
(1) Community gardens, with their rows of bountiful produce, are becoming popular across the United States and the world because they
provide places where people get to work with their hands, where people find a peaceful, quiet place, and where communities can come
together. (2) More people are keen on reaping the benefits of these gardens, which include improved overall health, better community
relationships, and a healthier environment. (3) Starting a community garden is a detailed process.
(4) Like with any group project, a community garden requires like-minded individuals to come together(5) So, the first step is to create a
planning group. (6) The planning group should include people committed and willing to make time for the community garden.47) Next, it's
important to find a location for the garden. (8) Some local governments set aside lots for people to use as community gardens 19) Some
organizations help people rent or purchase spaces for gardening. (10) Once the location is chosen, the final step is to decide the layout or
structure of the garden. (11) For example, some gardens use wooden crates to plant vegetables or fruits. (12) Other gardens arrange plants in
rows in small plots in the ground. (13) Based on the layout, people can begin planting in the garden.
(14) Community gardens require teamwork and dedication, which can help bring a community closer
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(2) More people are keen on reaping the benefits of these gardens, which include improved overall health, better community

relationships, and a healthier environment.

Explanation:

From the part of the passage above, it shows the statement that needs to be improved through use of simplifying words and maybe a single simple sentence.

Answer:

I took it and got it right!

Essie has a job three afternoons each weak on those days she rushes home from school and helps Mrs. Ignacio for two hours she watches hazel the Ignacios' youngest child white Mrs. Ignacio works at hes computer Essie thinks taking care of hazel is great fun feels is a workful way to spend her after-school time hazel thinks it is great fun too it's always fun to have an older friend to play with;'' she says

10) Read the excerpt. Then, choose the best answer. When Horace uses the names of well-known people to make comparisons and explain hypocrisy, he is using _____. logical fallacies

CONNETIONS
Writers often make connections between blank, blank, and blank

First of all, don't give me the description of the play, description of John Proctor's character, or any thing else you guys try to come up with to get points. Just answer the question (with detail would be preferable). Consequences will be a reported.

Explain why Miller chose to have John Proctor change in the Crucible (referring to his character development).​

Read these lines from "To Autumn."
Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness,
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
Conspiring with him how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run;
What does the phrase "Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun" mean?
O The sun and autumn are literal individuals who care about each other.
O Autumn is the only season the sun likes.
O The sun and autumn work together like loving companions.
O The sun begins to retreat as autumn progresses.

3.
I'm pretty sure the answer is either letter C or letter D, but I could be wrong
Hearing a song on the radio without paying attention to the lyrics is an example of _____.


A. emphasis


B. preparation


C. active listening


D. passive listening

Can someone help please and thanks

How do active participants in a discussion behave? Check all that apply.

They support opinions with evidence.

They bring notes to the discussion.

They ignore others’ opinions.

They respect group members’ roles.

They only listen to others’ opinions.

Music Requirements
Daveed Trellis
Most schools have some sort of fine arts elective requirement that students must complete in order to graduate.
Students often take music appreciation or drawing or sometimes even dance. I believe, however, that all public
Schools should require students to learn to play at least one musical instrument instead of allowing them to take
any art elective. I have many reasons for suggesting this graduation requirement. First and foremost, I believe
that students should be required to learn to play a musical instrument because it is fun.
Which sentence would add an effective supporting detail to this argument?
Practicing an instrument can be a tedious and repetitive task for the person
learning to play
Studies have shown that learning to play a musical instrument improves a
person's ability to memorize material
Musical instruments are very expensive to purchase, and sometimes
parents have to purchase instruments on payment plans.
Parents often complain about having to listen to misplayed notes and
terrible squeaks while their child learns to play an instrument

What is the author's purpose in "A Performance to Remember"?
to persuade readers to think Bonaly is the best figure
skater
o
to describe how different skating tricks have evolved
over time
to critique Bonaly for her behavior during skating
competitions
O
to inform readers of a famous figure skater's path to
success
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Which statement best describes the tone of the poems?

Both poems are sorrowful, mourning lost loves.
Both poems are complimentary, paying tribute to loved ones.
Both poems are nostalgic, remembering better times.
Both poems are introspective, thinking about serious situations.

help me with the first 4 please will mark brainliest.​

Pain. . . . . . . . . . .

Smoke began to billow out of the experimental machines because A there were two Alexanders. B they hadn't been tested for smoke. " C Alexander spilled soda on them. D the time machine exploded. HELP ASAP I only have 20min to answer before I go to math so pls help​

Read this sentence.
The animal shelter, which is located on Midway Street, is looking for volunteers to help with a
variety of tasks, such as walking dogs cleaning kennels, hand-feeding newborn kittens, and
supporting the pet adoption process.
Which edit should be made in this sentence?
A. delete the comma after shelter
B. insert a comma after volunteers
C insert a comma after dog's
D. delete the comma after kennels

Emma Silver loses her eyesight in a nightmarish accident and she must relearn everything. How does this tragic accident affect Emma?

four legs good, two legs bad , analyse the quote​

Subtopics in an informative essay should be
A)equally important in support of the main idea
B)only partly related to the main idea
C)ranked from most convincing to least
D)unrelated to one another

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PLEEEEEEEASE HELP i’m giving 10 points and brain list all I can need is help is that too much to ask for

According to Truth, how did Jesus treat women?

Which of these sentences would work as the main idea for an article about famous lion tamers?
Lion taming was not a common circus act until sometime in the twentieth century.
Most famous lion tamers started their circus careers performing a less dangerous act.
Lion tamers are not thinking of the lion’s needs when they force them to perform for roaring crowds.
Elephant trainers were usually less famous to crowds than lion tamers and trapeze artists.

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Hi! Can anyone change this sentence into a more effective one!
"A beautiful and relaxing experience"

Best answer get brainly :)

create a example of an SSV sentence

Arugementative essay on the topic " Boarding school is better than day school " in opposing side​

In this sentence, which word should be replaced with more precise language?
The Arctic temperature has kept the research specimens super cold
A)Arctic
B)Research
C)Specimens
D)Super

Please help me!!!!!!!

The author wrote "IMG Academies" primarily to-
F .highlight the reasons people pursue a career in sports
G .persuade readers to support schools that specialize in training student-athletes
H .inform readers about a unique school and the students who attend it
J .convince student-athletes to enroll in a specialized school for sports

If you were writing that a
theme of "The Cactus" is that
"appearance is often different
from reality," which passage
would give the best support?
A. She...invested him with
a...supernatural number of...attributes...
and he had absorbed the oblation.
B. Why had it ended thus? There had
been no quarrel between them, nothing--
C. For the thousandth time he
remarshalled in his mind the events of
those last few days....