Which sentence should be revised to eliminate excessive wordiness??
Answer:
The first sentence is wordy, and should be revised.
My reasons:
1. A hurricane is a storm (common sense), there is no need to reiterate that.
2. An entrance to your house is a door (most of the time), there is no need to say "including the doors."
3. It would have been sufficient to just say "debris" and not "debris and other items"- because what other items?
Let me know if this helps!
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Answer:i think it is the third one
Explanation:
because it sounds like the smartest one and i would chose that
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Write a paragraph comparing and contrasting the text medium and the audio medium of “The Tell-Tale Heart,” analyzing how the pace, character, and mood varied within each medium and how these differences affected you. Use the ideas from your organizer to write your paragraph.
Introduction sentence: Write the title, author, and your claim.
Body: Write about how the pace, character, and mood affected you in each medium.
Conclusion sentence: Restate your ideas about your claim.
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What is the RISING ACTION of The Golden Touch by Nathaniel Hawthorne?
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Which of these is the best revision of the sentence??
Answer:
I believe it's the bottom answer.
Is page 1 of the importance of being earnest the most important section of the book?
Scene: Morning-room in ALGERNON'S flat in Half Moon Street
The room is luxuriously and artistically furnished. The
sound of a piano is heard in the adjoining room. LANE is
arranging afternoon tea on the table, and after the music has
ceased, ALGERNON enters.
ALGERNON. Did you hear what I was playing, Lane?
LANE. I didn't think it polite to listen, sir.
ALGERNON. I'm sorry for that, for your sake. I don't
play accurately — any one can play accurately — but I
play with a wonderful expression. As far as the piano is
concerned, sentiment is my forte. I keep science for
Life.
LANE. Yes, sir.
ALGERNON. And, speaking of the science of Life, have
you got the cucumber sandwiches cut for Lady Bracknell?
LANE. Yes, sir. (Hands them on a salver.)
ALGERNON. (Inspects them, takes two, and sits down on the
sofa.) Oh! ... by the way, Lane, I see from your book that
on Thursday night when Lord Shoreman and Mr. Worthing were dining with me, eight bottles of champagne are entered as having been consumed.
LANE.
Yes, sir; eight bottles and a pint.
ALGERNON.
Why is it that at a bachelor’s establishment the servants invariably drink the champagne? I ask merely for information.
Answer:
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Answer:
Because it represents symbolism of the build up of each character, the first page gives the reader an idea of what kind of scenario is going on, along with character development with the novel.
Explanation:
which of these would not be included in the index? A. main headings B. page numbers C. definitions D. subheadings
Answer:
C. definitions
Explanation:
Option C
Answer:
C
Explanation:
The following sentences have just one part of speech missing. Can you tell which one it is?
1. Well, I looked in the car and I couldn’t find the purple sweater.
2. Wow! You and little John swim well, but I don’t.
3. Oh, they are happily baking cookies and brownies in the kitchen.
Answer:
2
Explanation:
Sentence 2 should be written like this,
Oh wow! You and little John swim well, but I don’t.
Answer:
3 never start a sentence with an oh
What have you learn from this? 3-5 sentences please
Answer:
that i used this app in 6th
Explanation:
What is the most important section in the importance of being earnest book? (1 page only)
Answer:
the whole page
Explanation:
How many nouns and verbs are in this sentence? :)
I saw a huge cat outside my house and that cat scared me since he was the size of a huge box, the cat was on the sidewallk rolling towards my sister at the end of the street right next to the old yellow house whom my friends aunt lived.
Answer:
verbs = 4
nouns=10
Explanation:
Civil Disobedience
Part 2:
Thoreau’s ideas had a profound effect on a man named Gandhi. Gandhi, was a leader in India who worked to end British rule. He led India to independence and inspired many to non-violent forms of protest and resistance. He fought to end poverty, worked to expand women's right to vote, and built bridges between ethnic and religious groups. Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet. In India, Gandhi's form of protest was called the "non-cooperation movement." He urged Indians to boycott British education systems and leave government jobs. The movement was very popular, and in part to stop its spread, the British controlled government arrested him. After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again. He inspired many to follow him on marches to protest various taxes. On one such march, thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax. This march set the example of non-violent resistance to the government that others in the country followed. Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.
Gandhi's model of resistance and reform was creative, appealing, and successful. As a result, Dr. Martin Luther King looked to Gandhi when the time came to find a way to resist segregation in the South. The lunch counter protests, famous for the passive response to anger, and even violence, aimed to end the separation enforced by laws in some regions of the South. King also organized walks, marches, and bus rides that were meant to bring attention to the issues facing African Americans. These forms of protest were directly modeled on Gandhi's, but King took them straight to the source of oppression. Where Gandhi's protests created awareness and built momentum, King's protests were in the face of great hatred and fear. The passive, non-violent protests were ultimately effective, mainly because the passive response to violence cast the opposition as brutes. However, change came slowly and at the cost of many lives. King remained committed to peaceful protest, however, until his death. King learned from Gandhi, expanding on what worked, applying old techniques to a new problem. Gandhi owed his philosophy, in part, to a New England poet who loved the woods.
Based on the bolded paragraph, which line shows the success of Gandhi work?
Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.
After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again.
… thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax.
Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet.
Answer:
Yes mate it does
Explanation:
Answer:
d
Explanation:
i did the text
In the spaces to the left of each number write P for phrase, IC for independent clause, and DC for dependent clause.
______ 1. Under extreme pressure
______ 2. To turn to the right
______ 3. Knitting is difficult
______ 4. Who the best candidate will be
______ 5. In time of extreme danger
______6 Listen
______ 7. When I heard
______ 8. Until you told me
______ 9. I was chosen
______ 10. Whom he addressed
______ 11. Seen in the park
______ 12. Walk carefully
______ 13. Angered by that remark
______ 14. Before the exam
______ 15. Before he left
______ 16. On the floor were my books
______ 17. Jump
______ 18. Since swimming in the lake
______ 19. Riding home in the car
______ 20. Besides jogging
Answer:
1. DC 2. P 3. DC 4. IC 5. P 6. DC 7. P 8. P 9. DC 10. IC 11. DC 12. DC 13. P 14. DC 15. DC 16. P 17. DC 18. P 19. P 20. Dc
Explanation:
Civil Disobedience
Part 1
Most people remember Gandhi and Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. as reformers who practiced non-violent forms of protest and advocacy. Both effectively changed the popular opinion about emotional issues for their countries and brought in a wave of change that was long overdue. But the practice of non-violent protest, or civil disobedience, started long before either Gandhi or King. It began with a quiet, shy poet who is best known for writing a lot about a pond.
Henry David Thoreau lived from 1817 until 1862, mainly in the area of Concord, Massachusetts. The issue that would tear the country apart in the 1860s had already begun dividing the nation. Thoreau was only 14 when Nat Turner led the slave rebellion in Virginia and was later hanged. In his late 20s, Thoreau began speaking against slavery in public, echoing the voices of freedmen like Frederick Douglass and Lewis Hayden.
Thoreau believed that a government that supported slavery was corrupt and immoral. He was also deeply suspicious of government. For these and other reasons, Thoreau refused to pay his poll tax for a number of years. The poll tax was a legal tax owed by every person. It was basically a tax on one's body. After not paying for years, he was at last arrested. He spent only one night in jail, however, as a relative paid the tax for him. He was reportedly furious that any tax was paid on his behalf.
It was this experience that Thoreau wrote about in an essay called "Civil Disobedience." In this essay, he argued that being moral and just came before allegiance to government. He wrote “If the machine of government is of such a nature that it requires you to be the agent of injustice to another, then, I say, break the law." He also felt that voting was not enough to ensure that the right thing be done. He wrote that "even voting for the right is doing nothing for it… A wise man will not leave the right to the mercy of chance…" He felt that one had a moral responsibility to resist unjust laws.
What does the author show in the story of Thoreau going to jail?
How Thoreau protested
How angry Thoreau was
That few people protested
He was influential
Answer:
Thoreau protested laws that he believed were unfair.
Explanation:
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Ans:
Computer refers to ...
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In Candide, how does the author show satire when he describes the deadly battle in Chapter 3?
The concept of genealogical relations and the social legitimacy they confer is thoroughly satirized, first in the description of Miss Cunégonde's flawless nobility, then in Pangloss's explanation of his syphilis contamination, which he traces all the way back to Christopher Columbus's voyage to the Americas. Voltaire succeeds in making a pointed commentary about the arbitrariness of privilege and wealth, but also misfortune and poverty. In his view, there is about as much nobility in having descended from several thousands years of uninterrupted aristocracy as there is in having caught a venereal disease originally transmitted by the famous explorer of New World
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Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!
Charge for the guns' he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!'
Was there a man dismay'd?
Not tho' the soldiers knew
Some one had blunder'd:
Their's not to make reply,
Their's not to reason why,
Their's but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.
Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turned in air
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre-stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death,
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.
When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wonder'd.
Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred!
Put the poem into your own words.
A summary should be ___ than the original text. A. worse B. shorter C. long D. better
Answer: D
Explanation: because it makes sence.
Read the following scenario: Cinderella's stepmother has forbidden her to go to the ball until all of her chores are done. Cinderella enlists the help of her animal friends to get her chores done and make a dress for the ball. Which outcome would best describe this scenario?
The character defeats the problem.
The character learns to live with the problem.
The problem defeats the character.
The character does not learn from the problem.
what is the resolution of the golden touch
Answer:
The resolution in this story occurs when King Midas washes in the river to rinse the Golden Touch away from him, turning his daughter back into a person.
Explanation:
Why is page 1 of the story the importance of being earnest important?
"Which sentence contains an underlined word that means "excitement”?”
-No one challenged her authority since she was the expert.
-His eagerness and enthusiasm were evident in his work.
-They showed the puppy affection by holding and petting it.
-The house looked hideous in the picture, but pretty in person.
Answer:
-His eagerness and enthusiasm were evident in his work.
Explanation:
the definition of excitement is a feeling of great enthusiasm and eagerness. knowing the definition of the word you have to find a synonym for helps you identify what words to look for.
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Is page one of the story the importance of being earnest the most important part/section of the story? If not what is the most important section?
Answer:
The important section is Visoin
Explanation:
Answer:
Ze important section is Visoin!!
Explanation:
How is a poet like a musician?
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William Wordsworth is:
A. Pondering on the memory of when he saw the flowers
B. Is gay
C. Is still staring at the daffodils
D. Is calm when he remembers the daffodils.
E. Likes the waves better than the daffodils.
What is the resolution of The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde? Utterson enters the lab. Poole finds a dead body. Mr. Hyde writes a confession. Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde die.
The corrective and the suitable resolution of the Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde is that Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde die.
They both were finding the connection between the demons and the para-nominal activities which harm the other person. Even though the doctor written the confess that the experiment would go very right and they change in demon .
There was the conflict occur between the mind and the character due to which they lost the control of mind and behave very weird and completely behave like the demon and making the harm for others
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Answer:
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde die.
Explanation:
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What does the word “gay” mean in the context of the passage?
A. Bisexual
B. Colorful
C. Unhappy
D. Content
E. Attracted
Answer:
Content
Explanation:
There’s nothing to do with love in the poem so it’s not A or E
In addition the poet isn’t describing something so it’s not colorful
And unhappy is the opposite of what is being conveyed in the passage
Add a subordinate clause in these sentences to make them complex sentences. Add the type of clause that is in parenthesis.
1. I have met the president of the company, __________.
(adjective)
2. I want _______________.
(noun)
Answer:
1. I have met the president of the company who's been living in that $1,000,000 estate by the ocean.
(adjective)
2. I want what you have.
(noun)
Explanation: