Which sentence should be revised to eliminate repetition??

Which Sentence Should Be Revised To Eliminate Repetition??

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Answer 1

Answer:

the first one

Explanation:

because it is meaningless

Answer 2

Answer: C

Explanation:

Each excerpt can be rearranged and placed as it would be in a complete essay. The excerpt given as the third choice is repetitive of the first choice in the fact that it talks about limiting an internet users search results. The first excerpt is seen as coming after the last excerpt and flows quite a lot better than the last and the third. Happy learning! : )


Related Questions

One of the girls brought some candy for you.

The prepositional phrase(s) is/are _____.

brought some candy
for you
of the girls
some candy
one of the girls

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Answer:

for you

Explanation:

A prepositional phrase is a group of words consisting of a preposition, its object, and any words that modify the object.

Answer:

for you

Explanation:

Memories of a Memory

Have you ever witnessed something amazing, shocking or surprising and found when describing the event that your story seems to change the more you tell it? Have you ever experienced a time when you couldn't really describe something you saw in a way that others could understand? If so, you may understand why some experts think eyewitness testimony is unreliable as evidence in scientific inquiries and trials. New insights into human memory suggest human memories are really a mixture of many non-factual things.

First, memory is vague. Imagine your room at home or a classroom you see every day. Most likely, you could describe the room very generally. You could name the color of the walls, the floors, the decorations. But the image you describe will never be as specific or detailed as if you were looking at the actual room. Memory tends to save a blurry image of what we have seen rather than specific details. So when a witness tries to identify someone, her brain may recall that the person was tall, but not be able to say how tall when faced with several tall people. There are lots of different kinds of "tall."

Second, memory uses general knowledge to fill in gaps. Our brains reconstruct events and scenes when we remember something. To do this, our brains use other memories and other stories when there are gaps. For example, one day at a library you go to quite frequently, you witness an argument between a library patron and one of the librarians. Later, when telling a friend about the event, your brain may remember a familiar librarian behind the desk rather than the actual participant simply because it is recreating a familiar scene. In effect, your brain is combining memories to help you tell the story.

Third, your memory changes over time. It also changes the more you retell the story. Documented cases have shown eyewitnesses adding detail to testimony that could not have been known at the time of the event. Research has also shown that the more a witness's account is told, the less accurate it is. You may have noticed this yourself. The next time you are retelling a story, notice what you add, or what your brain wants to add, to the account. You may also notice that you drop certain details from previous tellings of the story.

With individual memories all jumbled up with each other, it is hard to believe we ever know anything to be true. Did you really break your mother's favorite vase when you were three? Was that really your father throwing rocks into the river with you when you were seven? The human brain may be quite remarkable indeed. When it comes to memory, however, we may want to start carrying video cameras if we want to record the true picture.

Which line from the text best explains why the author suggests we start carrying video cameras?

You may understand why some experts think eyewitness testimony is unreliable
The next time you are retelling a story, notice what you add
With individual memories all jumbled up with each other
The human brain may be quite remarkable indeed

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author’s suggest carrying video cameras,so you can capture important or cool moments in your life,because memory tends to be vague

the author suggests to carry video cameras around because our memories tend to fade over time

Why is page one of the story the importance of being earnest important?

Scene: Morning-room in ALGERNON'S flat in Half Moon Street
The room is luxuriously and artistically furnished. The
sound of a piano is heard in the adjoining room. LANE is
arranging afternoon tea on the table, and after the music has
ceased, ALGERNON enters.
ALGERNON. Did you hear what I was playing, Lane?
LANE. I didn't think it polite to listen, sir.
ALGERNON. I'm sorry for that, for your sake. I don't
play accurately — any one can play accurately — but I
play with a wonderful expression. As far as the piano is
concerned, sentiment is my forte. I keep science for
Life.
LANE. Yes, sir.
ALGERNON. And, speaking of the science of Life, have

you got the cucumber sandwiches cut for Lady Bracknell?

LANE. Yes, sir. (Hands them on a salver.)
ALGERNON. (Inspects them, takes two, and sits down on the
sofa.) Oh! ... by the way, Lane, I see from your book that
on Thursday night when Lord Shoreman and Mr. Worthing were dining with me, eight bottles of champagne are entered as having been consumed.

LANE.
Yes, sir; eight bottles and a pint.

ALGERNON.
Why is it that at a bachelor’s establishment the servants invariably drink the champagne? I ask merely for information.

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Answer:

sorry

Explanation:

Answer:

cuz its only 1 page so everything is important

Explanation:

This speech was given prior to the Civil War and nearly 70 years before women in the United States were allowed to vote. What is Sojourner Truth saying about the connection between civil rights for African Americans and the rights of women? Why was she able to stand before a large audience and expound this way without notes or preparation? What issue of today might inspire you to make an unrehearsed speech? Post a detailed response to the Sojourner Truth Discussion prompt. Then respond to two classmates' posts.


I cant link the speech but you will be able to find it online i believe, please help me out im rlly struggling







HELPPPP

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Sojourner was fighting for people’s rights and wanted to stand of for all African americans

Which statement accurately describes a cause-and-effect relationship described in this excerpt?

Because Napoleon departs for France, the French army and scholars decide to stay in Egypt.
Because the French army and scholars decide to stay in Egypt, Napoleon decides to depart for France.
Because the French soldiers are tearing down a ruined wall in a fort, they discover the Rosetta Stone.
Because the French soldiers are searching for the Rosetta Stone, they tear down a ruined wall in a fort.

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because the french soldiers are searching for the rosetta stone they tear down a ruined wall in a fort!
because the french soldiers where searching for rosetta stone they ended up tearing the wall

The word _____ below could be replaced with the synonym "twisted", in the sentence without changing its meaning.

TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;


diverged
bent
undergrowth

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The answer is bent i took the test and got it right
the answer would be bent because it has the same meaning as twisted

need this rigth now plz help

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

because no where in the paragraph does it say that ALL junior college students choose to also go to a regular college, and the whole point of this paragraph is to tell the reader that it many people decide to go to a junior college first, because it’s cheaper. hope this helped

i think the answer is c

Suzanne is an archaeologist working on the uncovered site of an old Viking community what kind of education would Suzanne have needed to work on this site?

an associate degree in math
an apprenticeship with a blacksmith
a masters degree in anthropology
an internship with the local construction firm

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Answer:

A master's degree in Anthropology

Explanation:

Suzanne is working on a Old Viking Community. To understand the vikings, Suzanne should have a masters degree in Anthropology. Anthropology is the scientific study of humanity, concerned with human behavior, human biology, cultures and societies, in both the present and past, including past human species. They consider the past, through archaeology, to see how human groups lived hundreds or thousands of years ago and what was important to them. To work in the uncovered site of an old Viking community, she needs a master's degree in Anthropology.

a masters degree in anthropology, C

I'll give brainliest! What is the meaning of this quote in you're opinion?
“A life spent making mistakes is not only more honorable, but more useful than a life spent doing nothing.” — George Bernhard Shaw.

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Answer:

It means making mistakes in life is useful.

Explanation:

Because if we never make mistakes we will never learn from them and it shows we have honour and nobility because we are learning from them and not repeating these and even better if we learn from others' mistakes.

In a written story, the dialogue is different then the rest of the story because _. punctuation marks are used,sentinses and paragraphs are used, and periods are used. please hurry I need help ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i have to go feed my horse

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Sentences and paragraphs
Just ignote this im only doing this so that i message people

What point of view does Emily Brontë use in this excerpt from the novel Wuthering Heights?


In all England, I do not believe that I could have fixed on a situation so completely removed from the stir of society. A perfect misanthropist’s heaven: and Mr. Heathcliff and I are such a suitable pair to divide the desolation between us. A capital fellow! He little imagined how my heart warmed towards him when I beheld his black eyes withdraw so suspiciously under their brows, as I rode up, and when his fingers sheltered themselves, with a jealous resolution, still further in his waistcoat, as I announced my name.



A.
first-person point of view
B.
second-person point of view
C.
third-person limited point of view
D.
third-person omniscient point of view

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First person view.You can tell because she’s using words like “I” that shows that she is speaking from her own point of view.
A.
First person point of view Bc it says “I”

I'm writing a book.
I can't decide the name of the lead character.
Luna or eurus

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Answer:

Luna sounds like a good name, what's the story about?

Explanation:

whoever u r i prefer curus

***50 POINTS***
Give a definition for the following 5 words:
-Moral Values:
-Economic Values:
-Political Values:
-Social Values:
-Human Rights:

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Answer:

Moral values- a certain type of guideline that we humans set for ourselves based on what is ethical and good

Economic Values- are things considered when making a purchase or selling something, these are considered to see if the transaction is really worthwhile

political values- a political value is what we consider to be important to us when choosing a political figure to represent us

social values- is the importance we place on experiences and people around us

human rights- rights that we consider a belief that every person is entitled to simply because they are people

These are definitions to my understanding and might not be what you're looking for, let me know if it helped!

Explanation:

Moral values are relative values that protect life and are respectful of the dual life value of self and others.

economic value is a measure of the benefit provided by a good or service to an economic agent.


true or false: An epic work is a story or poem that focuses on heroic characters that act out grand struggles.

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Answer:

I think the answer is False

Explanation:

Sorry if it is not:-(

Answer:
True

Reasoning:
It is true because epic means a long narrative poem about a larger-than-life hero

Identify each of the following sentences as simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex.

1. He didn’t want any vegetables or rice with dinner.

2. Do you want the pasta, or would you prefer the steak?

3. In Paris last year we saw many attractions, including the Eiffel Tower.

4. After the game on Thursday, we are going to the movies.

5. After you go to the game on Thursday, come to dinner with us.

6. The book that is on the shelf is yours, and you can take it whenever you want it.

7. Although the cookies were burned, they tasted good.

8. Jamie and Ralph called me last night and then came over for a visit.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Which one

simplecompoundsimplesimplecomplexcompound and complexcomplexsimple

Explanation:

Use the excerpt below to answer the question.


That the inhabitants of the English colonies in North-America, by the immutable laws of nature, the principles of the English constitution, and the several charters or compacts, have the following RIGHTS:

. . . That they are entitled to life, liberty and property: and they have never ceded to any foreign power whatever, a right to dispose of either without their consent.

—Declaration and Resolves of the First Continental Congress, 1774


In the Declaration of Independence, one of the rights listed in this excerpt was replaced with which of the following as an unalienable right?

Group of answer choices

rule by democracy

expression of ideas

pursuit of happiness

freedom to worship

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Answer:

rule by democracy

Explanation:

if im right please add me brainly

Answer:

rule by democracy

Explaintion:

What does William find in the library that inspires him to put his dreams of becoming a scientist into action?
BOY WHO HARNESSED THE WIND

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Inspirational book on aviation
One Saturday, Gilbert and William meet at the library. William finds a science textbook with diagrams and pictures that he finds very easy to understand. ... While the books are difficult for William to get through, he is lucky to have these books available when other rural students might not have that advantage

Make sure to change a few words just so it sounds like it is coming from you, and that it matches other work you have turned in :)

Which statement best evaluates the effectiveness of the conclusion
paragraph?
Thesis Statement: My future job must include human interaction, a
nontraditional workspace, and teamwork.
Main Points:
1. Work with people
2. Work in a nontraditional workspace
3. Work in a place where coworkers share ideas
Conclusion: In the end, my future job will be one that allows me to
collaborate with my coworkers in dynamic and nontraditional
workspaces. If I am forced to sit behind a desk I will be extremely bored. Furthermore, I will be less productive if I am forced to work alone without the chance to discuss ideas with my coworkers. So the next time an adult asks me what I want to do when
I grow up, I will tell them a job without a desk, in an office full of
people. That's my dream job!

A. The conclusion is effective because it presents interesting information not addressed in the body paragraphs.
B. The conclusion is ineffective because it does not restate the thesis in a new way.
C. The conclusion is effective because it restates the thesis, summarizes the main points, and includes a satisfying close.
D. The conclusion is ineffective because it fails to leave the reader with a thought-provoking question.

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I think the answer will be B because I’m smart and I know how to do that
The answer for this question is C.

Which of these best describes how to reduce wordiness in this sentence??

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I’d choose the last one but it may not be correct.

The first one because the sentence has no need to know about when it was after New Years because you start your new year resolution after the New Years

PLEASE HELP ME
i relly need help

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Answer:

b

Explanation:

Answer:

D is the answer

Explanation:

D is the most respectful and efficient response to this.

Please give me brainliest if I helped!

Please help mee read this and summarize the story pleaseee read the whole thing

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Answer:

,,,Explanation:

answer: your picture isn’t loading

explanation: i’m not sure what the picture or story is but to summarize a text just take some important details

Which replacement corrects the spelling error in this sentence??

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The answer is the second option choice
The second it is “affecting” not effecting

which phrase is the most negative connotation: a garnish style, a bold style, or a gaudy style

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Answer:

a bold style

Explanation:

because it makes you speak well

Answer:

The most negative connotation is a bold style. I'm not 100% sure but I got this exact same question on my test and I answered, 'A bold style'.

Explanation:

It helps you speak better and be better.

Choose the sentence in which the word in ALL CAPS is used incorrectly.
Group of answer choices

A. The traditional family in China expects the eldest male, usually the grandfather, to be AUTOCRATIC.

B. Although she officially ruled with her brother, Cleopatra was the unquestioned AUTOCRAT of Roman Egypt.

C. Children learn to be self-governing by gradual practice in AUTOCRACY.

D. By dividing power among the legislative, judicial, and executive branches of government, the U.S. Constitution prevents a president from becoming an AUTOCRAT.

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

the answer is c!! hope this helps

WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST IF RIGHT
Nights and Dragons— From the memoir of author Abigail Prynne I could have given up, but I thought about my grandmother. She always told me that "people who believe that science is the answer to everything are missing out on everything else." With her words in mind, I searched some more. There were many facts that hinted that dragons may not be fictional. I noticed that cultures across the world all described dragons in similar ways. This was odd because they had no way to communicate with each other. I found dragons mentioned in more than just stories. They appeared in old legal papers, in the travel logs of Marco Polo, and in the Bible. I saw that the Chinese calendar uses a different animal each year. Dragons are included along with eleven real animals. I began to believe it was a real possibility that all of these people were talking about a creature that actually existed. The text discusses the Chinese calendar by writing, "Dragons are included along with eleven real animals." What does that imply?
(A. Dragons are the only fake animal on the Chinese calendar.
(B. Dragons are not the only fake animal on the Chinese calendar.
(C. Dragons are real because all the other animals on the calendar are fake.
(D. Dragons are real because all the other animals on the calendar are real.

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Answer:

Well i guess dragons are the only fake animal on the Chinese calendar because we only mostly heard about dragon's in paper and other then that

SORRY IF IS WRONG I JUST TRIED MY BEST, HAVE A GREAT DAY :)
d- dragons are real Bc all other animals on the calendar are real.

PLZZ HELP!! YOU GET 20 IF YOU DO!!!
Find the root and its meaning in the word below. Use a dictionary if necessary.

Disease


root:
1.dis
2.sease
3.ease
4.sea

meaning:
5.pain
6.comfort
7.absence of
8.health

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Root: 3.
Meaning: Health

Answer:

1

Explanation:

hffggfy uyhjifbuyg yggjigf yygggh uhggghgg hhgg

What part of speech is the word in CAPS?

Brian walked SLOWLY home, as the day was so warm and pleasant.

Noun
Verb
Adverb
Adjective

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The word “slowly” is an Adjective
The word slowly is an adverb. Not adjective.

Read the paragraph. Then answer the question that follows.

Perhaps you wanted pizza for dinner, but were out voted by the rest of the family who wanted chili. This is similar to what happens in a community. One person has to give up a right for the good of the group. Sometimes citizens' duties and rights conflict with each other. A good example is a public protest. People have the right to meet in groups and share ideas. However, a protest can disrupt traffic or other normal activities. A city must provide extra police protection to keep people safe. Therefore, the city has the right to require permission in advance for a protest. Government must make laws to balance the rights of individuals and different groups of people.

Which of the following statements best describes this paragraph?

The paragraph contains categories of comparison.
The paragraph contains a simile.
The paragraph contains no text connections.
The paragraph contains an analogy.

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I just woke you so much lol lol I’m bout to go get home and now I need some money to do my hair and then
um, i think the answer is “the paragraph contains a comparison

can someone please help me with this ​

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Answer:

Is it possible to easily end homelsessness in America? Homelessness is an economic problem. Homelessness lack access to health care and often have chronic illnesses, made worse by tough living conditions. sleeping outside in all weather, eating cheap starchy foods, and being in close quarters at social service agencies with other unhealthy people. Homelessness also causes negative effects like loss of self-esteem,  Becoming institutionalized, Increase in substance misuse. There are so many problems and we would be furthermore in-depth  So no it's not easily possible to end homelessness in America.

Explanation:

Please give brainly if this helped.

this is correct i just did it

someone please help me

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Explanation:

epic 426

non epic 153 hope this will help you

what did u get for the answer??
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