MARKING BRAINLIEST: Ok so I just need some help on a little sentence I wrote. Its my friend (josh) speaking to me about a party. I just need to know if the punctuation for this sentence is correct or I should split it into 2 sentences and if I have to explain how.
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"Oh yea," Josh says, "I forgot to mention i'm throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know, so get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."

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Answer 1

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Its looks fine as is, I would just change it to "Oh yea." Josh says, ect.

Or you could say "oh yea." Josh says, "I forgot to mention that throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know." Put something here about what 'Josh' is doing (he looks at you, he looks away, ect.) "You better get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."  

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

Overall, this looks great, but there are a few minor errors that can easily be fixed. I'll fix some problems with the bold and italic fonts:

Explanation:

Original text: "Oh yea," Josh says, "I forgot to mention i'm throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know, so get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."

The word "yea," is usually spelled like this in an informal text, but if you are writing a story/essay, use the correct form of this word as, "Yeah."

Also, after your quoted text, you write, "Josh says,..." and for this, you would need to replace the comma (,) with a period (.) because these are two separate independent sentences. So it would be, "Josh says."

And then, in the second sentence, you need to capitalize, "i'm," since it is a proper noun that the subject is using. So, it would be, "I'm."

And, if needed, you can split the second quotation text into two sentences by replacing the comma beside the word, "know," with a period, and then you should capitalize and add a comma beside to the word, "so," since it is the beginning of a new sentence. But, if you want, you can keep it as it is.

So, your text should be written as the following:

"Oh yeah," Josh says. "I forgot to mention I'm throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know. So, get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."

I hope this improves your work. Let me know if all goes well! :D


Related Questions

Enjoy your christmas break if you have one! All of you have worked hard, continue to work hard although it may be stressful. It all pays off in the end. Happy holidays everyone.

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Answer:

Thanks

Explanation:

Thank youuu and you too

You see four boys messing with these girls
Which one are you saving?
And which on will you keep?

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Answer:

the right one

Explanation:

what about you?

Two friends went on holiday together. But only one friend returned from the vacation and said that the friend experienced an unfortunate accident and died whilst abroad. The police arrested the survivor after stating: "Your travel agent called. You murdered your friend." How did the agent know that it was a murder? Solve the riddle pls

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Answer:

The agent probably knew about the murderer, because the accused only bought a ticket to return from the trip.

Explanation:

When the friend bought the travel tickets, he did not buy two tickets back, but only one, that is, he knew that his friend would not return, although he did buy two one-way tickets. Thus, this individual becomes the main suspect in the murder, since only the two friends were on the trip and it is necessary to investigate all the possibilities of his friend's death.

In this case, the police contacted the travel agent who passed all the ticket purchase information between the two friends.

Write your own sentences using the following words( one word per sentence for a total of 8 sentences).
Peril- Credulity- Condole- Prosaic- Grimace- Compensation- Fate- Resignation

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Answer:

1. The man experienced the peril of a polygamous marriage.

2. Her response made Prof. Mike loose his credulity.

3. The teacher does not condole indiscipline in her class.

4. The prosaic poem made everyone to laugh at the poet.

5. He left with a grimace when he was told about the incident.

6. The company will give you a compensation at the end of the year.

7. Simon knew that his fate has been decided.

8. He gave me a resignation letter at the close of work.

Explanation:

I have been able to write my own sentences using the given words.

Peril

Grimace refers to one's expression of disapproval, pain and disgust.

Prosaic refers to the lack of originality and imaginativeness.

Credulity refers to one's willingness to accept something which may be uncertain. It is one's willingness to easily believe things.

Peril refers to a serious danger.

Compensation refers to a reward given to someone for work done or incident that occurred.

Fate refers to what happens in one's life which is out of the person's control.

Resignation refers to the resigning from jobs or offices.  

At the police station, after Starr details the events leading up to the shooting, the detective shifts her focus to Khalil's possible drug and gang activity. Why do you think he did this? Discuss Starr's reaction to the "bait."

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Answer and Explanation:

1. The policeman tries to change the focus of the crime that happened. He looks for a way to get Star to display information that allows him to modify what really happened about Khalil's death and put him as the culprit in the story, with Khalil being killed by a racist police officer who used the abuse of authority to do this. .

2. Star doesn't fall for the bait and even though she knows that Khalil was involved in the drug trade, she knows that his murder had nothing to do with it and that he was murdered unfairly, due to the abuse of power and violence police against blacks.

my favourite book essay​

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Answer:

????

Explanation:

What does this quote mean to you “There is no better exercise for the heart than reaching down and
lifting people up".

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that in the end, being good to people and helping them through tough times or bringing them up can be more rewarding than a workout :)

This quote mean to you “There is no better exercise for the heart than reaching down and lifting people up" means that we have to be good.

What is the positive quote?

“Wherever you go, regardless of what the weather, usually deliver your personal sunshine.” “If you need mild to return back into your life, you want to face in which it's far shining.” “Success is the sum of small efforts repeated day in and day out.” “Happiness is the simplest aspect that multiplies whilst you percentage it.”

“There is no better exercise for the heart than reaching down and lifting people up" that it is to define us to lift up everyone and we should help them.

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Read the excerpt from “How I Learned English.”

Someone said “shin” again,
There was a wild stamping of hands on the ground,
A kicking of feet, and the fit
Of laughter overtook me too,
And that was important, as important
As Joe Barone asking me how I was
Through his tears, picking me up
And dusting me off with hands like swatters,
And though my head felt heavy,
I played on till dusk
Missing flies and pop-ups and grounders
And calling out in desperation things like
“Yours” and “take it,” but doing all right,
Tugging at my cap in just the right way,
Crouching low, my feet set.
“Hum baby” sweetly on my lips.

How do things change for the speaker after he laughs with the other boys?

He tries harder to impress others.
He finally has a sense of belonging.
He no longer cares about fitting in.
He no longer avoids playing baseball. 30 points

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Answer:  C

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Explanation:

Answer:

It is CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

Explanation:

On this day in 1955, Rosa Parks refused to give up her bus seat. This was a brave action by Parks. What is the bravest thing you've ever done? Be sure to include details about the event and why you think you were brave.
5-7 sentences

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Answer:

I just wanted the point

Explanation:

dont get mad

Stave 2 depicts Scrooge as a young boy in a boarding school in England. This was somewhat ordinary for a family with money back then (to send their boys to boarding school). According to Stave 2, how were things different for Ebenezer though, as compared to the other boys attending his school?

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Answer:

Lonely and alone.

Explanation:

Though Ebenezer attented a boarding school and belonged to a pretty good family back then, he was always lonely and alone at school.

Stave 2 depicts how Ebenezer would sit all alone near the fireplace while reading books. When the Christmas spirit showed Ebenezer this scene from the past, he wept to see himself as a poor forgotten self.

Ebenezer then regretted not giving anything to the boy who was singing a Christmas Carol at his door last night. The scene from his past reminded him that the boy who sang the Christmas carol was just like him.

This is a quote from Jamie Oliver. Do you agree or disagree with his views? Be prepared to explain. ​

“Sugar is the next tobacco, without a doubt, and that industry should be scared. It should be taxed just like tobacco and anything else that can, frankly, destroy lives

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Answer:

I disagree sugar can be adicted but not that much as tobacco.. Its nonsense to compare tobacco to sugar. If I would be him I would think abt how to waste less food

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The sentences have been numbered to help you identify them more easily.

This Mystery Rocks! By Cyntha Schlagel

1The Drifting Rocks are a strange phenomenon still unexplained by science. 2Located in Death Valley, California, the rocks sit on hot, flat ground. 3Unlike normal rocks, they have trails etched behind them as if they have traveled across the sand. 4Some trails are only a few feet. 5Some trails are over half a mile long. 6Each trail is as baffling as the next.

7The variety of rock movement has baffled scientists for decades. 8Some rocks seem to roll as they move forward. 9Some take unexplainable routes. 10Large ones have traveled past small ones that have stayed still. 11Some scientists suggest that the rocks are pushed by the wind. 12Others believe they slide on small amounts of ice or mud. 13So far, research has not confirmed any theory.

Which choice best describes how the author organized information? Group of answer choices:

A. Cause and effect

B. Chronological order

C. Fact by the fact

D. Problem-solution

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Answer:

C!!! :)

Explanation:

Answer:

C

Explanation:

these are facts and it is def not cause and effect so therefore it is C

Read the sentence.

The essay is composed of three parts introduction, body, and conclusion.

How should the underlined part of the sentence (parts introduction,) be punctuated?
A parts, introduction
B parts: introduction
C parts; introduction
D parts-introduction

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Answer:

it's either A or B

Explanation:

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Carmen is writing a research paper about school uniforms.
Which search term will provide the most useful results?
"Massachusetts public school system"
"controversial issues in schools"
"arguments against mandatory school uniforms"
"school uniforms"

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Answer:

The one titled “SCHOOL UNFIROMS“

Explanation:

Unless she is looking about negative things about the uniforms then it would be the 3 choice

Answer:

Arguments against mandatory school uniforms.

Explanation:

This is the most related topic besides the last one, but the last one doesn't sound credited.

HELP!!! ASAP!!!! PLEASE!!!
Read these paragraphs.

A police officer’s primary duty is to protect the lives and property of others. To become a police officer, a high school diploma or its equivalent is required. Additionally, most must also graduate from their agency’s training academy and fulfill difficult personal and physical qualifications, as well. In 2010, police officers in the United States earned a median yearly income of approximately $55,000. Unfortunately, there is a high rate of on-the-job injuries for police officers.

A judge is responsible for applying the law in court and overseeing the legal process. One of the major duties of a judge is to help negotiate agreements between opposing parties. Most judges are elected or appointed, and they are typically required to have a law degree and to have worked as a lawyer. The average median yearly salary for judges in 2010 was $92,000.

Both of these careers are a part of the legal system. Similarly, both require specialized training before a job can be obtained. However, it takes much longer to become a judge than it does a police officer, and a judge can expect to make more money. Although they are both trained to uphold the law, the role each plays in the legal system is very different.

What does the signal word “Similarly” tell the reader in the third paragraph?

Judges and police officers both play roles in the legal system.
Police officers and judges earn similar yearly wages and benefits.
It takes the same amount of time to become a police officer and a judge.
It takes specialized training to become both a police officer and a judge.

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Answer:

It takes specialized training to become both a police officer and a judge.

Explanation:

In the sentence "Similarly, both require specialized training before a job can be obtained", it says exactly the answer, and then there's the sentence

"However, it takes much **longer** to become a judge than it does a police officer", that automatically crosses out the option "It takes the same amount of time to become a police officer and a judge."

It can't be the option "Police officers and judges earn similar yearly wages and benefits." Because of the sentence "and a judge can expect to make more money."

In the text, there is an sentence that would trick some people into believing that it's the option, "Judges and police officers both play roles in the legal system." this is the sentence in the text "Although they are both trained to uphold the law, the role each plays in the legal system is very different." It wouldn't be it because sure it says that they play a role in it, but no where does it say they both play a role, and it's irrelevant to the question.

Answer:

D i think

Explanation:

Which sentence uses correct capitalization?
A.
Sports Illustrated's May article "Too Brutal Or The Future?" focuses on mixed-martial arts.
B.
Sports Illustrated's May Article "too Brutal or the Future?" focuses on Mixed-Martial Arts.
C.
Sports Illustrated's May article "Too Brutal or the Future?" focuses on Mixed-Martial Arts.
D.
Sports Illustrated's May article "Too Brutal or the Future?" focuses on mixed-martial arts.

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The correct answer would be D

Answer: D. Sports Illustrated's May article "Too Brutal or the Future?" focuses on mixed-martial arts.  

Explanation: The major words in the titles of books, articles, and songs should be capitalized (but not short prepositions or the articles "the," "a," or "an," if they are not the first word of the title). The article of the magazine should be capitalized since it is a proper noun.

The plot of “Hercules” is driven by specific events that take place. Write an essay analyzing how the passage draws on elements commonly found in myths. Use evidence from the passage Hercules to support your response. (it's by Ron Clements, also its a TDA a text dependant analysis essay )

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Answer: (sorry if this isn't good enough, I know so little of Greek and Roma old history)

Hercules, a roman and Greek god from roman mythology and past, Hercules a man that was and still is one of the most famous Greco-Roman legendary heroes. Son of Zeus, and a slayer of beats,

this man has dozen and more stories about him, to slaying the The Nemean lion. The Nemean lion was a vicious monster to the Greeks, slay and scarified to Zeus by The famous Hercules

and the well known story of the The Capture of Cerberus  

or known as the Three-headed dog, a short tempted mammal, All through He, Hercules, didn't slay such a beast, he returned the beast the king, Hera at his palace but turns out Zeus was there, and he grants Hercules immortality. He was very proud of his son, and Then was access to go the heavens.

but these characters Hercules, Athena, Helen of Troy, many beasts and etc. are all going around the character Zeus, his son, and these other godly beings

What does "hiatus" mean as it is used in the sentence below?
I thoroughly enjoyed that TV series and was saddened to discover that it was going on hiatus after only six episodes.
A.
a passage
В.
an opening
C
a gap
D
a break

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Answer:

D, a break

Explanation:

I thoroughly enjoyed that TV series and was saddened to discover that it was going on hiatus after only six episodes. A break "hiatus" mean as it is used in the sentence. Thus, option (d) is correct.

The term "hiatus" in the phrase "I thoroughly enjoyed that TV series and was saddened to discover that it was going on hiatus after only six episodes" refers to a break or interruption in the continuity of a work, series, action, or program.

The speaker is disappointed that the television show is ending or pausing in this situation after only six episodes. Since it is a noun, the term "hiatus" is frequently employed in formal settings to denote a brief interruption or pause in a course of action.

Therefore, option (d) is correct.

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What is a Myth please answer

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Answer:

Myth is a folklore genre consisting of narratives that play a fundamental role in a society, such as foundational tales or origin myths. The main characters in myths are usually gods, demigods, or supernatural humans

Explanation:

Myths are stories that are based on tradition. Some may have factual origins, while others are completely fictional.

Ballard did not know exactly where the Titanic's wreak was located. How did he overcome this problem. (Need answer and Explanation)

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The following is an exerpt from “Finding The Titanic“

(from Planet-Science.com)

”The traditional way to search for wrecks was to use sonar. Sonar uses sound to detect objects underwater. As well as using sonar, Ballard searched for the Titanic's trail of debris. He estimated that it would be over 2km long. Ballard had just 12 days to find it, in an area of ocean five times the size of New York.

To find the trail, Ballard used a deep-sea vehicle called Argo. Argo had lots of cameras and was towed behind the ship. Argo floated just above the sea floor, 2.5 miles down in the cold, dark Atlantic.

After days of searching, Ballard found the trail. He knew the currents would take the trail northwards. Ballard followed the trail and sailed right up to the Titanic!”

noelle was the first person to arrive
which word or phrase does the refer to?

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Answer: the first person?

I’m not 100% sure what the questions asking

Explanation:

List one stereotype that you have heard. Where did you hear this? Do you think it is a common stereotype in society? How might this stereotype be damaging to the group involved?

5 sentences please and thanks

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Answer:

I've heard the stereotype that i've heard is that all cheerleaders are mean.

Explanation:

it is a common stereotype to think all cheerleaders are stuck up and full of themselves. it can damage the group involved because no other people may want to talk to them since they assume they are rude. this stereotype is not true. yes, there are plenty of stuck up cheerleaders, but some are nice and kind.

how would you describe grim in the story freak the mighty? add details from the story to support your clam.

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Answer:

R-How I describe grim in the story freak the mighty.

A-so grim is like a curious suspicious type of guy who think his grandson would be exactly like his father.

C-In the text, it says, ""It’s more than just the way Maxwell resembles him, Grim says that night in the kitchen, the boy is like him, we’d better watch out, you never know what he might do while we’re sleeping. Like his father did."

E- This shows that Grim wonders what his grandson will turn out to be. A good child or just a person exactly like his father.

CHAPTER 1 AND PAGE 3 AND 4

( This is a good book btw)

What true love means to you? What needs to exist in order for true love to exist.?​

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im to young to love

Explanation:

well a guy or girl you have a quick connection with

Answer:

Trust. ... While it is crucial to trust the person with whom we are in love, it is equally important to trust ourselves. True love makes us feel vulnerable without being fearful or defensive. Loyalty in relationships not only brings emotional stability, but also increases intimacy levels.

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Write a video game script involving at least three characters. One character must be a nonplayer character (NPC). Include various story elements and plot devices that you learned about in this course. Your script should answer the following questions:

Describe the traits and goals of the characters.
How do the traits benefit the other characters?
Which traits harm the others?
Describe the story setting in which these characters come into play.

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Answer:

welcome gamers to foreigner the remake with all new characters with our main character Amanda , Amanda is on a filed trip to rio with her teacher mr.beanz her 2 best friends david and Elizbeth and some others then all of sudden they made a stop in the middle of no where mr.beanz went to go ask the pilot what happen but then he realizes that there only mannequins everyone on the plain starts to worry then amanda wakes up she tells the  others about it but they brush her off and get on the plain amanda refuses and go backs to the bus then she wakes up and is on the crashed plain later they get off and start walking mr.beanz is very out of shape so he suggest to just sit down and wait for help while david freaks out and runs with Elizbeth following amanda goes the other direction of her compass she checks her phone (no signal) after hours of walking amanda gets tired and thirsty but runs into this old man walking into this cave amanda yells for help he looks at her and she followed

Explanation:

These questions come from the book Holes by Louis Sachar chapter 16-19. Please answer the questions in complete sentences and use one peace of textual evidence, and include the page number.

1. Why do you think Stanley is worried about the true location of the hole?
2. Do you think X-Ray is worried? Why or why not?
3. Why do you think Stanley smiled when X-Ray announced that Stanley’s letter was probably from his girlfriend?
4. What do you think Zero’s childhood was like?
5. Why isn’t Zigzag very apologetic about hitting Stanley in the head?
6. What does it say about Zero’s feelings toward Stanley that he asked Stanley to show him how to read and write?
7. How do you think Stanley has changed since he arrived at Camp Green Lake?
8. Do you think the boys committed major or minor crimes? Why?
9. How do you think Magnet got his name?
10. Why does Stanley say that again he is in the wrong place at the wrong time?
11. Why does Stanley say that he stole the bag of seeds?
12. Why do the other boys turn their backs on Stanley?
13. How do you think Stanley feels about the other boys and their relationship?

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Answer: It’s totally dum to put all these points Imao

Explanation:

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This is from the short story “Doll House”
(a) Identify two reasons to explain why the doll’s house is initially kept outside.
(b) Connect What does the decision to keep the house outside allow the girls to do that they might not have done otherwise?
Use one piece of evidence

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Answer:

1  the dollhouse smells like paint 2- They want to show it off.

Explanation:

They are able to invite friends to come see it.

lily works daily in a library because she wants to be a writer one day.

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Answer:

What is the question?

Explanation:

Answer:

It's good that Lily knows what she wants to do with her life.

Explanation:

Which of these vocabulary words would be an appropriate description of a clown?

droll
bohemian
imperceptible
rancorous

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Answer: I would say its most likely droll. Hope this helps!

Explanation:

I looked up the definitions and figured it out.

Answer:

It’s droll!!! Have an awesome day ❤️❤️

Explanation:

Why do Americans love equality? Should we? Can the desire for it ever be satisfied?

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Answer:

Americans crave equaity so much because they're deprived of it everyday. Sometimes people can be cruel to those who aren't doing anything wrong. Not everyone thinks the same way in this country, everyone has different opinions and views on different races, those who are LGBTQ+, and so much more.  It would be impossible for people to be satisfied with equality in America because no one thinks the same.

Explanation:

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