Which sentence should be revised to eliminate excessive wordiness??
Answer:
The first sentence is wordy, and should be revised.
My reasons:
1. A hurricane is a storm (common sense), there is no need to reiterate that.
2. An entrance to your house is a door (most of the time), there is no need to say "including the doors."
3. It would have been sufficient to just say "debris" and not "debris and other items"- because what other items?
Let me know if this helps!
Civil Disobedience
Part 2:
Thoreau’s ideas had a profound effect on a man named Gandhi. Gandhi, was a leader in India who worked to end British rule. He led India to independence and inspired many to non-violent forms of protest and resistance. He fought to end poverty, worked to expand women's right to vote, and built bridges between ethnic and religious groups. Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet. In India, Gandhi's form of protest was called the "non-cooperation movement." He urged Indians to boycott British education systems and leave government jobs. The movement was very popular, and in part to stop its spread, the British controlled government arrested him. After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again. He inspired many to follow him on marches to protest various taxes. On one such march, thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax. This march set the example of non-violent resistance to the government that others in the country followed. Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.
Gandhi's model of resistance and reform was creative, appealing, and successful. As a result, Dr. Martin Luther King looked to Gandhi when the time came to find a way to resist segregation in the South. The lunch counter protests, famous for the passive response to anger, and even violence, aimed to end the separation enforced by laws in some regions of the South. King also organized walks, marches, and bus rides that were meant to bring attention to the issues facing African Americans. These forms of protest were directly modeled on Gandhi's, but King took them straight to the source of oppression. Where Gandhi's protests created awareness and built momentum, King's protests were in the face of great hatred and fear. The passive, non-violent protests were ultimately effective, mainly because the passive response to violence cast the opposition as brutes. However, change came slowly and at the cost of many lives. King remained committed to peaceful protest, however, until his death. King learned from Gandhi, expanding on what worked, applying old techniques to a new problem. Gandhi owed his philosophy, in part, to a New England poet who loved the woods.
Based on the bolded paragraph, which line shows the success of Gandhi work?
Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.
After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again.
… thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax.
Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet.
Answer:
Yes mate it does
Explanation:
Answer:
d
Explanation:
i did the text
In the spaces to the left of each number write P for phrase, IC for independent clause, and DC for dependent clause.
______ 1. Under extreme pressure
______ 2. To turn to the right
______ 3. Knitting is difficult
______ 4. Who the best candidate will be
______ 5. In time of extreme danger
______6 Listen
______ 7. When I heard
______ 8. Until you told me
______ 9. I was chosen
______ 10. Whom he addressed
______ 11. Seen in the park
______ 12. Walk carefully
______ 13. Angered by that remark
______ 14. Before the exam
______ 15. Before he left
______ 16. On the floor were my books
______ 17. Jump
______ 18. Since swimming in the lake
______ 19. Riding home in the car
______ 20. Besides jogging
Answer:
1. DC 2. P 3. DC 4. IC 5. P 6. DC 7. P 8. P 9. DC 10. IC 11. DC 12. DC 13. P 14. DC 15. DC 16. P 17. DC 18. P 19. P 20. Dc
Explanation:
What are the four main categories used to develop a narrative?
1. point of view, sensory detail, characters, and style
2. evidence, opinion, style, point of view
3. plot, claim, point of view, and style
4. plot, characters, point of view, and style
I will give u a brainlyist if u answer this Q correctly
Answer:
no change needed I think so please tell if its correct
Answer:
The 3 one
Explanation:
it is they will lose their cat
i will give you another Brainlyist if u answer this Q correctly
Answer:
The last one. It says loose and it's supposed to be lose.
Fahrenheit 451 HELP!
symbol, metaphor, simile, allusion, and foreshadowing.
(Give examples and page numbers!)
Answer: easy peasy
Explanation: G O O G L E is the best answer
what you know about a "review"? How is it different from other types of writing?
Answer:
a review is a short a summary about how you feel about this certain thing. lets say book for example. If you were to write a review you would technically rate the book. Ex. I loved this book because it was really unique and its not too hard.
Explanation:
04.05 history versus fiction brainly
flvs
Answer:
what is flvs?
Explanation:
Read the story description and historical context for the short story "Condensed Milk" and answer the question.
Story Description:
If you were starving, what would you do for food? "Condensed Milk" tells the story of a political prisoner in a Russian gulag (a forced-labor camp) who is faced with a choice: stay in the gulag—working and starving—or escape from the prison and risk dying. What choice would you make?
Historical Context:
From 1929 to 1953, Joseph Stalin was the dictator of the Soviet Union. His goal was to transform the Soviet Union from a poor society into a world superpower. He used terror and violence to rule, and under his reign, millions of his own people died in work camps, from starvation due to famine, or by execution.
Select a detail to support the idea that punishment was harsh under Joseph Stalin's rule.
Stalin ruled the Soviet Union from 1929 to 1953.
Stalin sentenced Soviet citizens to work camps or had them executed.
Stalin used terror and violence to rule the Soviet Union.
Stalin wanted to transform the Soviet Union from a poor country to a superpower.
The correct option is C. Stalin used terror and violence to rule the Soviet Union a detail to support the idea that punishment was harsh under Joseph Stalin's rule. He used terror and violence to rule, and under his reign, millions of his own people died in work camps, from starvation due to famine, or by execution.
What is the main problem in the story "Condensed Milk"?The dramatic fight between two forces in a story is referred to as conflict. There wouldn't be a plot without conflict. Conflict is an issue between the protagonist and antagonist forces that needs to be resolved.
After his own experiences in a gulag, Varlam Shalamov wrote this book about them. It portrays the prisoners' apathy as they slowly approach death, the certainty of betrayal and deceit, and the incessant need for material fulfillment to decrease the hollow, burnt sensation inside.
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Father, Betsie, and Corrie were released.
True False
Answer:
true
Explanation:
I don't know this answer is right or wrong
But I tried my best.
Thank you
S. E. Hinton said in an interview that she really gets to know her characters. In fact, she says she focuses more on them than on the setting in her books. In the first chapter of The Outsiders, how does she describe the “greasers”?
by using mostly indirect characterization
by showing how each one handles conflict
by using the plot details to show what they’re like
by using mostly direct characterization
Hey there!
I think that the correct answer would be D.
For example, she directly describes how Ponyboy and most of the gang style their hair, and how they "grease" it.
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Is page 1 of the importance of being earnest the most important section of the book?
Scene: Morning-room in ALGERNON'S flat in Half Moon Street
The room is luxuriously and artistically furnished. The
sound of a piano is heard in the adjoining room. LANE is
arranging afternoon tea on the table, and after the music has
ceased, ALGERNON enters.
ALGERNON. Did you hear what I was playing, Lane?
LANE. I didn't think it polite to listen, sir.
ALGERNON. I'm sorry for that, for your sake. I don't
play accurately — any one can play accurately — but I
play with a wonderful expression. As far as the piano is
concerned, sentiment is my forte. I keep science for
Life.
LANE. Yes, sir.
ALGERNON. And, speaking of the science of Life, have
you got the cucumber sandwiches cut for Lady Bracknell?
LANE. Yes, sir. (Hands them on a salver.)
ALGERNON. (Inspects them, takes two, and sits down on the
sofa.) Oh! ... by the way, Lane, I see from your book that
on Thursday night when Lord Shoreman and Mr. Worthing were dining with me, eight bottles of champagne are entered as having been consumed.
LANE.
Yes, sir; eight bottles and a pint.
ALGERNON.
Why is it that at a bachelor’s establishment the servants invariably drink the champagne? I ask merely for information.
Answer:
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Answer:
Because it represents symbolism of the build up of each character, the first page gives the reader an idea of what kind of scenario is going on, along with character development with the novel.
Explanation:
Which sentence contains a misspelled word??
Answer:
second option
Explanation:
chose is past tense
Answer:
The second sentence.
Explanation:
There are misspelled words.
Hey…. I just need some advice. So I suck at math right like I dont know anything, or I should say I dont remember anything! So a little bit over the summer I have been doing Khan acadamey and what not. But I still cant seem to do anything right! So school here starts september 1st and Im gonna be a freshman in highschool. What do I do!!!
study some in any way possible and talk to your parents abt it, be confident and be yourself and that way ppl will like you.
if we keep on a career pathway what are we doing?
a.playing it safe
b.following directions
c.working toward a goal
d.changing our mind
If we keep on a career pathway we are doing or working toward a goal. Thus option (c) is correct.
What is work?In simple layman language a work that what has been done. In a scientific sense, a force must be exerted, and there must be displacement in the direction of the force.
The SI unit of work is the joule (J), which is defined as the work done by a force of 1 Newton in moving an object through a distance of 1 meter in the direction of the force.
The work done by a force on an object can be positive, negative, or zero, depending upon the direction of displacement of the object with respect to the force.
Without the displacement we cannot say that the work has been done by a body. For example, studying for 2 hours is not a work.
If we keep on a career pathway we are doing or working toward a goal. Therefore, option (c) is correct.
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Civil Disobedience
Part 1
Most people remember Gandhi and Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. as reformers who practiced non-violent forms of protest and advocacy. Both effectively changed the popular opinion about emotional issues for their countries and brought in a wave of change that was long overdue. But the practice of non-violent protest, or civil disobedience, started long before either Gandhi or King. It began with a quiet, shy poet who is best known for writing a lot about a pond.
Henry David Thoreau lived from 1817 until 1862, mainly in the area of Concord, Massachusetts. The issue that would tear the country apart in the 1860s had already begun dividing the nation. Thoreau was only 14 when Nat Turner led the slave rebellion in Virginia and was later hanged. In his late 20s, Thoreau began speaking against slavery in public, echoing the voices of freedmen like Frederick Douglass and Lewis Hayden.
Thoreau believed that a government that supported slavery was corrupt and immoral. He was also deeply suspicious of government. For these and other reasons, Thoreau refused to pay his poll tax for a number of years. The poll tax was a legal tax owed by every person. It was basically a tax on one's body. After not paying for years, he was at last arrested. He spent only one night in jail, however, as a relative paid the tax for him. He was reportedly furious that any tax was paid on his behalf.
It was this experience that Thoreau wrote about in an essay called "Civil Disobedience." In this essay, he argued that being moral and just came before allegiance to government. He wrote “If the machine of government is of such a nature that it requires you to be the agent of injustice to another, then, I say, break the law." He also felt that voting was not enough to ensure that the right thing be done. He wrote that "even voting for the right is doing nothing for it… A wise man will not leave the right to the mercy of chance…" He felt that one had a moral responsibility to resist unjust laws.
What does the author show in the story of Thoreau going to jail?
How Thoreau protested
How angry Thoreau was
That few people protested
He was influential
Answer:
Thoreau protested laws that he believed were unfair.
Explanation:
What have you learn from this? 3-5 sentences please
Answer:
that i used this app in 6th
Explanation:
The setting of a story is the time and ___ where the action unfolds.
HELP
Which of these is the best revision of the sentence??
Answer:
I believe it's the bottom answer.
PLEASE HELP WILL GIVE BRAINIEST
Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!
Charge for the guns' he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!'
Was there a man dismay'd?
Not tho' the soldiers knew
Some one had blunder'd:
Their's not to make reply,
Their's not to reason why,
Their's but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.
Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turned in air
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre-stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death,
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.
When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wonder'd.
Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred!
Put the poem into your own words.
I need a last name for a made up story related to snow, ice or winters.
Answer: Ice Queen
Explanation: because it would be a beautiful name
Read the paragraph. Then answer the question that follows.
Perhaps you wanted pizza for dinner, but were out voted by the rest of the family who wanted chili. This is similar to what happens in a community. One person has to give up a right for the good of the group. Sometimes citizens' duties and rights conflict with each other. A good example is a public protest. People have the right to meet in groups and share ideas. However, a protest can disrupt traffic or other normal activities. A city must provide extra police protection to keep people safe. Therefore, the city has the right to require permission in advance for a protest. Government must make laws to balance the rights of individuals and different groups of people.
Which of the following statements best describes this paragraph?
The paragraph contains categories of comparison.
The paragraph contains a simile.
The paragraph contains no text connections.
The paragraph contains an analogy.
What part of speech is the word in CAPS?
Brian WALKED slowly home, as the day was so warm and pleasant.
Noun
Verb
Adverb
Adjective
Answer:
That would be a past tense verb!
Explanation:
Verbs are action words.
PLZ HELP
Which of these is the best revision of the sentence??
Is page one of the story the importance of being earnest the most important part/section of the story? If not what is the most important section?
Answer:
The important section is Visoin
Explanation:
Answer:
Ze important section is Visoin!!
Explanation:
Which of the following should group members do in order to ask good questions during a discussion?(1 point)
A. Listen closely.
B. Speak loudly.
C. Use evidence.
D. Share feelings.
What makes a question or comment relevant to a discussion?(1 point)
A. It is clearly connected to the topic.
B. It follows the rules set by the group.
C. It responds to a question.
D. It explores an idea.
Answer:
1. A: listen closely 2. A: it is clearly connected to the topic
Explanation:
Number 1, is simple. Asking questions means you have to understand what is going on meaning you have to listen closely. Number 2, the lesson says that questions and comments should be related tot he topic of the discussion. If they aren't, the discussion tends to get off track. And as a kid who once took debate, this was a major rule: Stay on track! When you "explore" and idea, you end up talkling about the cookies your mother made last week instead of why recycling is bad.
In order to ask the question while there is a group discussion going on, one should listen carefully. Hence, Option A is correct.
The thing that makes the question more relevant to the question is the connectivity of the question to the topic. Hence, Option A is correct.
What is a discussion?Whenever there is a kind of meeting is held among two or more people in the context of solving any problem or an issue that they all are facing or any one of them is facing. Such a meeting is called a discussion.
This discussion can be formal or informal, it can be among colleagues, family members, friends, or anyone. The thing that is common in all the meetings or can be stated as the discussion is that there is a particular aim or motto for which they all have come together.
One can ask any kind of question in between or at the end of the meeting. But there is a condition, and that is the question should be asked after properly listening to others' views, and it should be irrelevant to the topic.
Thus, for both statements, Option A is correct.
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Read the following scenario: Cinderella's stepmother has forbidden her to go to the ball until all of her chores are done. Cinderella enlists the help of her animal friends to get her chores done and make a dress for the ball. Which outcome would best describe this scenario?
The character defeats the problem.
The character learns to live with the problem.
The problem defeats the character.
The character does not learn from the problem.
What can be difficult for people at bedtime?
falling asleep
moving a picture
talking to a parent
taking a warm bath
Add a subordinate clause in these sentences to make them complex sentences. Add the type of clause that is in parenthesis.
1. I have met the president of the company, __________.
(adjective)
2. I want _______________.
(noun)
Answer:
1. I have met the president of the company who's been living in that $1,000,000 estate by the ocean.
(adjective)
2. I want what you have.
(noun)
Explanation: